This was brilliant! It's true that many, including these kids, don't realize the extent of being a hero, the horrors, the pain and the scars that accompany it. I loved the silent communication between Link and Zelda and it was a lovely touch to their relationship.

Interesting. I don't think the kids got the picture.

I cried. This really fits with the game, I think.

This is wonderful.

this is from '08? lol I don't care. I love this story!

That was beautiful. It was very poetic. I loved how Link and Zelda could communicate secretly-through those parenthesis you used.

Great job. :D

I really like it. So vivid and poignant. Very good.

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I love the relationship you attribute to Link and Zelda, a little stoic but supportive overall. Wonderful descriptions and characterization - love it! :D

wow...

Wow, that's really good. I love the angst without having anyone killed/commit suicide. Very nice job.

:D

nice i didnt see as much angst as the usual suicide-link stories,and tahts just fine with me great job, nice story :D

Aw, I like those idiot kids, though! I think their sentiments are sweet. Anyway, I like this - I've drawn fanart of Link with scars, and in this, he reminds me of the hero from my other fandom (very few characters "out-scar" Vash the Stampede).

I like the sentiment here of your havinig Link and Zelda trying *warn* the children - to show them that true heroism isn't all in the glory - it's in taking a lot of crap. I just want to hug them both here.