I loved how dark this fic is. It's perfect written and gives the reader a special feeling I can't completely describe... something in between sad and happy with a little bit of loneliness sprinkled on top :) Really good :)

-Sophie

oh wats goin to happen

okay, so where's the rest? i cant even tell wheather or not this is going to be a good story! yet, it is beautifully written.

Very lovely fic you have here. The imagery is exceedingly beautiful, the language poetic, and the flow dramatic. You depicted the gloomy, regret-filled atmosphere of the story well. The characters and the interaction between them are well drawn but slightly hard to keep track of, since they are almost all original characters. The introduction and prophesy concerning Eryka seem a bit sudden, but I guess more exposition in the future story would let her "settle in" more.

huh

::thwaps Meri:: You will finish this! I want to know what I doooooo! ::whines:: Miss ya. ::huggles Meri:: Hope you get this. If so, love yas and good luck.

Alright! Meridian's baaack! _ And please, don't put down your work - I for one am a dedicated reader of it. Your writing is magnificent - powerful and filled with imagery. Please, you ahve to keep writing...

Superb writing. Plot...well...it was lost on me...but it was superb

Wheeee yay for mental scarrage! Whoo hoo! I can't say if this was bad or good only that is was exceedingly interesting. A big chaotic riddle is what came to mind. Heh pun. So Harry goes to the dark side and the dark side screws up the elements and they take over people and humans (magic or otherwise) are being slowley exterminated by the host of unnatural creatures that have been created by twisted power. Hmmmmmmmmmm. The dark is dark and the light is dark and everyone's gonna die, no hope at all ... excuse me while I go kill myself. LOL that is so depressing. I did really like this, it would be a good thing to post more. I did like the format in which this was written, veryconvoluted but it came together. Good job! ;p