Loved it

Aw..I loved it! Although, it was a bit confusing because there's so many people and it's hard to remember who likes who, or who's married to who, etc..(it was still pretty easy), but it's just a little confusing. GREAT JOB THOUGH! Is there a sequel?

I liked it a lot!

good idea but i can't help thinking that it might have worked better as a chapter story...

I think this could have been better. Your events seemed really off, what with Harry going through auror training and becoming head of the department within a few months. I also didn't really feel the love and I didn't like how they separated the children like that. Thanks for writing anyway.

I like your story it was good and I liked how you really portrayed the characters :)

I think the story idea was good. It just seemed a little rushed to me. It's not all that full of angst either. I think you also need to work dramatically on your grammar and staying within one POV.

I'd say for this to be angsty this would need some confrontations or antagonist. Of course this isn't very long but everyone immediately accepting everything and forgiving it all.. It's an interesting plot still. Although Severus retired awfully early. He's in his sixties and if wizards live upto two hundred he will still have a lot of years ahead.

good story

very beautifully well written :D

that's so cute add me please

nice story

GAY! so stupid. no plot

That was quite a lot to fit into such a short space. Nice banter. It would be interesting to see what happened if you expanded the end segment and used flashbacks from the earlier stuff, not a complaint, just thinking out loud. lexy

I enjoyed that, it was nice! Interesting trio, Harry, Sev, and Remus. I like the idea of Draco with Ginny, they make a good pairing.