Very believable story, with Jade describing his love as just fascination to Guy (rather than all those cheesy metaphors used to describe feelings). It was logical and to the point, but at the same time something meaningful and special.

I also like how you had Jade deny having regrets or things he wanted to do before the world's possible end. It fits very well with how he always tells Luke how he can't mourn over death, while at the same time saying he'll miss Luke once he's gone. The way he constantly goes back onto his own words - leading him to drink - and then think about Guy was a really powerful way to write about his feelings.

And of course, Guy has the best timing when he goes to meet Jade at the bar. I loved following Jade's thought process and how he believed Guy loved Noelle - even while registering that Guy seemed upset Jade fell in love with someone. The alcohol really does affect the great Necromancer!

Haha, jokes aside, I loved the witty line you had Jade say at the end too. "Someone ought to tell you the difference between a hint and the answer." It was so very Jade-like, and Guy's laughter in response also portrayed his character well.

I enjoyed it! Thanks for the oneshot. I think you just made me like this pairing.

"someone ought to tell you the difference between a hint and the answer." Ohhh you NAILED Jade's snarky comments down to a T! Totally had me snickering all the while reading about Jade trying to figure out who Guy liked. This was a wonderful read :3 I really enjoyed it! Well done :)

Kawaii!

ROTFL LOVE

"Someone really ought to tell you the difference between a hint and the answer." I really liked that line. XD I thought this was a sweet little piece. And I liked how Jade was working out through the group who Gailardia liked. And well, Noelle... she seems like the one to be paired up with Gailardia, even though he's scared of girls. But she can ride the Albiorre (forgot how to spell it after all this time), and it does hint it, except he actually just wants to control the darn thing. XD Please type more like this, please! _

Dawl! That was pretty cute there at the end. XD

I really enjoy the way you portrayed Jade here. And Guy for that matter. It was funny in a way, and I really liked it.

Excellent! That was adorable. My only issue is the spelling of Natalia, but your writing is wonderful.

E! THATS SO CUTE!

Aw! That was super cute _ They're my favorite Abyss couple, and so little is done with them ;~; I think this is beautifully done, really in character for both, and I like the focus being on Jade. :)

Heh, cute. I enjoyed it.

[Nervously, Jade leaned forward as if to tell him in confidence. Obediently, Jade also leaned in. And then, Guy’s lips were on his own.] The first 'Jade' should be 'Guy' instead ne?

Some capitalization errors, and your "Nathalia's" should be "Natalia's." There was also one instance where "your" should have been "you're," but the rest of the fic was fine (I think). You have a bit of impressive vocabulary (i.e. indomitable, scurrilous).

~Rayestar