The ending is just funny. I didn't find it THAT abrupt. But it IS hilarious. That was fun.

I'm really starting to like Merle, she's my type of person. That's to say, perfectly insane. Hmm... wonder what will happen at the party. Ahhh... snarky Sirius made an appearance! Did I mention I love snarky Sirius? Well, I do. And Amortentia? *winks* It's kinda cliché but who's to say that clichés don't work

Ooooh loved the developments here. The animosity clearly shown between Kate and Sirius (though I think that Sirius would have irritated the hell out of her with snide comments... but that's my opinion) and I can't wait to see how it builds. Also Lily hating the Marauders with the 'fire of a thousand dragons' cracked me up. Great chapter

So I just started reading the story, and I must say it's caught my fancy. I love how you're developing Kate, and Sirius too, but they kinda give off a pre-relationship James/Lily vibe but I could be wrong. Also love the fact that James and Lily are civil to each other for a change. Can't wait to continue
~ di
(my username's cheadsearc, but i'm unable to login, so...)

I liked this story, it was cute and there were a lot of good ideas in here. I especially liked Slughorn's party, I would have loved to read more about it. Admittedly, the revised chapters were way better and the ending was abrupt and the characters could do with more development, but it was a story with lot of potential nonetheless. Hopefully you'll update the others chapters in the future, I'd definitely reread them.

Sorry but this was a really shitty way to end the story
it was wayyy to abrupt

Can you write another chapter please

it was freaking awesome, i loved every word of it!

I know its not something to be proud of; but I lost my Head Girl batch during the holidays too. I found it, of course, but it was quite embarassing when I told my friends about it and they took it as a joke. They were like 'you can't loose something as important as that and besides you are the model student so its not possible'. Hah. Sorry to waste your time by writing this but i needed to get this out and we won't probably meet, so there. Anyways, this is a great story and my interest was piqued right in starting. Keep writing such wonderful works.

I enjoyed this story up until chapter nineteen. I could tell then that you were in a rush to finish it and it really made me not want to finish it. Mate, I'm sorry but that ending was shite. Such a shame because this story was bloody fantastic to begin with, it had such promise and now I'm thoroughly put out. I'm just glad I didn't waste longer than a day reading it.

So sorry for the horrid review, I'm just incredibly disappointed.

That's it?!

It was an abrupt ending, but the thought of a an unlikely couple getting together, more so than James and Lily, is delightful! Would like to see where this goes.

HEY, YOU! YEAH, YOU!...hi.

Looses diary- friends thinks she lost her virginity... *facepalm*

I loved it.