OMG, please dont stop this story there...I need more :o)

ouch!

well... that puts a spanner in the ointment.

I mean, a fly among the pigeons...

This story is wonderful, a very unique concept!

But I am suggesting you find a good beta reader, as you have quite a number of spelling and grammatical errors which are detracting from the overall reader experience. Just an example:

"This new life was not based on what had really happened in the specimens life. No this new existence was based on the deepest wishes, hopes and fears of oen being."

should read:

"This new life was not based on what had really happened in the specimen's life. No, this new existence was based on the deepest wishes, hopes and fears of one being."

See? Really small mistakes, easy to miss, but getting them right makes the story polished and professional.

Oh, the plot thickens! Poor Jack!

great... strange chapter, please up date soon

Aw, that's sad. I'm a smidgen disappointed that Jack's family life isn't real. :( But this is indeed an interesting twisty, and I'm looking forward to more. :D

Whoa! This is getting pretty deep. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I was wondering what the catch would be. Please post soon.

Enjoying this story - can't wait for more!

Excellent, please update soon!

I've read all the story so far and I am liking it. Look forward to the next chapter.

Love it! I can't wait to read the next chapters. I hope Jack remembers soon or we find out why he can't remember. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Your story is very well written. I hope to read more.

Great chapter, i hope Jack will remeber every thing soon... i hope the asgard or the tok'ra can help him, please up date when you get time

Aw, poor little Jack.

BTW, I think your formatting got messed up somewhere, because in the beginning of every line of dialogue, the quotations seem to be at the bottom of the letter, instead of the top. *scratches head*

Hey! You can't stop here! Come on!

*offering bribes or threats*