It saddens me to see this amazing, intense story of two strong, yet fragile characters end, but I totally understand. So, every couple of years...I read this story again, and fall for your wit and their hotness ;)

Wow, that was incredibly hot ;)

So I can't remember which Author's faves this is listed in...Meikela's? But I didn't realize it was incomplete! Aww! I truly have enjoyed your tale so far.

That said, I totally feel your pain. One of my favourite (Harry Potter) fanfictions has been incomplete for maybe 5 years now but the author says it's not abandoned. And I've written a fic which is incomplete though I have it drafted so it's not abandoned - at least not in my heart...which will hopefully one day win the negotiation with my head and hands and give me the mojo to go on.

I don't know you but I dare say your issue is that you over-analyze everything. You see each situation from each person's POV and the complexity of that overwhelms so that you can't just gloss over reality and come up with a HEA. Plot holes are not your forte. You see them, you want to fill them and then next thing you know, you've backed yourself into a corner with so many angles that and you're overwhelmed and your suddenly hippie muse is saying, 'screw you, man! I only signed up to help you with some citrus-y fluff! Duuude, I don't do realistic, dude! I'm out! This is fanficdom, man, where stalking is sexy and shit!'

Or maybe I'm just projecting my writing issues on to you. Haha!

Well, either way, I'll follow this story and you. It's been years but in the event that you ever one day decide to write a bit more, I'll be here...well, as long as this site is still here to send me notifications, I guess...

Excellent story...hope you haven't put it to bed without a happy ever after.

It's no wonder you never finished this. The angst and emotion going on must be horrendous to write, and at a bet, they were barely started. Reading this is like being put through a wringer, but in a good way if that's possible. I really get how Edward can watch someone for over a year without making any contact. It comes from feeling utterly undeserving, meantime yearning for something, or in this case someone, so out of reach they might as well be on another planet. There is the dichotomy of loving while being seen not to love, safe but unrequited. Imo I think it's more common than society realises.

So well written. You are not here. Anymore?

I'm confused, who made the first move? Intense chapter glad they have someone to confide in.

so sad the world often doesn't know the hell that goes on a young child's life, how they suffer in silence, I hear people frequently say kids are resilient but they really aren't that so much they just learn to hide from the boogey man. Edwards reaction to Jasper having a girlfriend is a bit strange, was he so busy paying attention to Jasper that he never noticed him with a girl. campus is small according to Jasper how did he miss that. Good chapter, intense feelings pain disclosed.

That seems a little bit over the line to do to a classmate, trying to picture in my head how this is happening good UST

Wow so what's that all about is Jasper straight I guess or doesn't know or doesn't realize he doesn't know good start, except seriously Jasper, carry an ashtray around campus?

"Wow. He was one intense-looking dude."

- That statement did it for me, then and there. I laughed at how it sounded coming from Jasper.

end note: I totally agree and love you for it! "Manly men, drive REAL cars!" LOL, I fucking love the sound of well tuned powerful engine!

Um...oh my GOODNESS! That's exactly what that was yummy yummy GOODNESS! That was so hawt, I'm smoking! LOL! Excellent work.

omg, have you stopped writing this? i had a fallback and this is the first fanfic i've read in like 3 years and it's not finished ahhhhhhh. i really want to read more of this so i hope you'll find your way back 3

wow, really angsty story, but I love the way you write.