I thoroughly enjoyed this story! You did such a great job of capturing the boy's characters perfectly... all while keeping your story interesting and relevant. Beautiful job with the descriptions and making this such a joy to read. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Oh my goodness. I cannot get enough of your writing. It is impeccably thought through and you understand the tone and feel of the show and characters so well, it’s scary. Every time I choose another story to read you immpress me with your continuous talents with writing and storytelling. There has only ever been a handful of writers on this website, that I have read, that have the ability to understand what it means to write as well as you do. I literally cannot wait to start another story, but I sadly have to control myself and be productive in other parts of my life. Thank you so much for this fantastic read!

Amazing. I loved every second of reading this

That's a really amazing story!I almost cried out loud on my bus.I love how Sam being so protective and how the brothers interacted to a lot for uploading this wonderful work.I was wondering why I didn't discover this piece earlier.

Really enjoyed this longer fic and how well it ties in with the series (and the mention from Nevermore). Also like the afterword you tend to put at the end. Having written for a couple other series, I know there's often a lot of extra thought and research that goes into it without ever really seeing it the the story itself. It's nice to see some of the background work, and I hadn't read anyone else's that includes it like you do.
Again, thanks for the enjoyable read. I'm looking forward to more!

Woah that was an awesome story! Loved how you described the underground area and the people living there. I'm not from the States and have never heard of them before, so that was really intersting for me to read. And I absolutely LOVED how you wrote all the difficulties and painful memories/situations Dean had to endure. Especially when Dean, after his kidnapping, couldn't recognise that he wasn't in hell anymore was really heart-wrenching! Also Dean's PTSD was very well-written and my heard was bleeding for him - especially in the last chapters! I liked that you had Cas involved as well and that he was helping Dean. Great story! xx

I just rediscovered this, many years later, obviously.

It is still so, so good, still relevant, and makes me so nostalgic for the earlier seasons of the show.

Thanks.

Amazing story, im in love with it

I loved this fic I could easily see it being a filler between those two episodes. You portrayed all the characters perfectly and I loved the role reversal between Sam and Dean

A brilliant fic. Interesting case with great descriptions of the setting and the situations, cool OCs, the story was incredibly vivid and suspenseful (that part where Sam and Dean watched the wall painting show them what happened - I don't think I even breathed reading it), and least but not last, you have such a great grasp of Sam and Dean.

It was such a joy to read this story, now I'm only a little sad that it's not an actual episode :)

But seriously, you're an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing this with us!

I have never read a more perfect story in my life. If you aren't a writer you should be. It was hard for me to read this, especially in the latter chapters as I am dealing with some major issues myself that, while not as harsh as surviving actual hell, sure gives me a run for my money. Your words have pushed me to seek counseling so you need to know you have helped someone with your story. I am grateful there are people like you out there, pushing hope instead of dope kind of thing. :-) Good luck with everything in the future and stay awesome! Jade

I know you don't write fanfiction for Supernatural anymore and don't even know if you'll get this review so long after it was printed, you might not even be on any longer, but had to tell you how much I loved 'Underworld'. The setting and the case were so riveting, you set up the atmosphere just perfectly. I loved the details, so interesting, a bit of history, and just enough information to understand and find interest in the story, but not so much that you zone out from detail overload. I've read a few of your other stories and I love the way you interpret the characters and circumstances afterwards, it adds such depth to the story. I won't go on and on, not knowing if you'll get this review, but kudos to you and your writing talent.

The bathroom scene was fantastic. Very simple, very sweet. Skillfully wrought and worded. Cas was portrayed perfectly. I can see how the scene was once set apart, though it definitely wedges itself in with the rest of the story. As a side note, I love how Dancy actually worked out as an ally. That's always fun having someone who can believe them.

This was a tremendously fascinating read. I liked your look at Sam and Dean's relationship, the descriptions of their surroundings were most vivid and the attention you paid to detail absolutely remarkable. It made this feel like reading a real novel.
Thank you for writing and sharing this marvellous story.

Should be sleeping but I had to finish your story. It will be a long day tomorrow on so little sleep but I just couldn't put your story down. Great story!