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fnfOzvSR chapter 1 . 10/7
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Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
i dont think i have any critisim. this is one of the best one shots i read :)
would also make in into a good chapeter story :)
KBZ chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
This was awesome! I want to put this fanfic in my pocket and love it and read it and rape every once in awhile.
heylalaa chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
aww! really nice! i love it. (:

thanks for the fic!
0987654321poiuytrewqlkjhgfdszx chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
xDD Cute! xDD TAJIMA'S LINES xDDD HAHAHA! xDDD ABE'S REACTIONS! xDDD
Farah.AshTree chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
AW. HAN!

I NEVER KNEW U WERE SUCH A ROMANTIC. AND may I say , rather.. naughty? ;D

Sincerely, Your everloving Fiend.(HAH!) , Fairy
Faye-Naruse chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Ah, I know what you mean. Oofuri is truly amazing. I myself never liked baseball before and now I've got this weird weak spot for it!

Your fic was adorable. I love that the other boys don't seem weirded out by Abe and Mihashi's relationship and instead just mess with them about it (and I totally agree with you that teasing Abe would be super fun) XD

Again, so IC! And your mechanics are great too~ Thanks for sharing!
bassment chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
All I can say is 'AW HOW CUTE XD'

I can't stop grinning... XD

Sorry, no constructive criticism here!
cg2006 chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
Oofuri was my first sport anime too, and I just fell in love with it. really, what is it? Does it have some sort of charm to it? That must be it!

Hee, cute story! I'd love to poke fun at Abe too, but i feel like Abe would probably beat my face in. XD I dunno, i mean, somehow i think maybe Abe wouldn't mind doing that to a girl who's really egging him on. haha... Though you don't get to see abe interact with any girls anyway except for shinooka and momo. Hm...
pinksnow chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
cute! so cute!
Naiyad chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Ha! ROFL! Why did think I wouldn't like this. It's very funny.

So...have they or haven't they? *mishcievious grin*
Fangirl chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Please write more! I love the story...

(,)
coolio chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
aw, i love u for this fic! {cute mental image}

XD nice depiction of each character...that is so tajima...so mihashi...so abe..so izumi..lol, plz make another one!
LexiI1030 chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
Really nice! Cute and funny too...you're right, teasing Abe IS really fun.
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