f...g jacob needs to die and charlie and biily need their asses kicked, hard!

thank you for this story. I really enjoyed it

You are a wonderful writer, I just found this story but I'm not sure if you are gonna finish? It's a shame if you decide not to, this is really good :-) thanks for all your effort!

Wow love this story!

Cant wait for the next update!

Please update.i lovthe story. Poor small childern

the whole story is very good. though it happens that in breaking dawn, jacob is there and also charlie and the others are mentioned from the book. so, you can end it with everyone being together again. and it is important for jacob to come back because he is the one who imprints in renesmee and because of it the whole pack of werewolves stand by the cullens when the volturi come to kill the cullens because they created an immortal child (which is, of course false). the volturi's stop in the first place because of the werewolves. if you havn't read breaking dawn yet, then you should.

Come on upload already it been a lllloooooooonnnnnnngggg while

Update. Really good! X

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I love this story

Please write more

your story is nearly irresistible , so please for the sake of all your entertained followers , get back on the proverbial wagon and continue the story .

Thanks ,

Roma...

Oh my god! I love this story! I love your other story to but this one is just so dam amazing! I can't I I mean this I can't wait for the next chapter! Up date soon! Oh and btw tour an amazing writer! And I love the way you write it also helps that I am a toldly freak for drama and your storys all was have awesome drama in them and for that o love u haha sorry for any miss spellings I just started this story tonight and it's like 3am and I am in an iPod read this story I could not put it down! Anyways love it and can't wait for more!

If this isn't the end where is it please? Im dieing to know what happens for a while now and now im thinking you just gave up on the story. Is there going to be a chapter 16 or is that it?

well, that's a change, most of the stories like this really do have the whole pack after them. It's been months, but at the top of chap 10, it'd apparently been 6 months, and it's not yet been that long since the last update, so I hope to see more soon!

The stories not bad, much better grammar than I'm used to.

Great Story! I usually don't read any stories that are not completed due to my complete lack of patience and I see that it has been 5 months since the last update...Please continue! I love what I have read so far and can't wait to see whats next :)

umm... hello! good story, loved it! please update soonnn!