Candace Flynn: No, not "me" me. The me that isn't me.

Definitely one of the most amazing DP stories I've ever read, you really kept everything in character while still managing to explore deeper subjects than the show ever would, nice job!

Interesting idea and plot and chapter

YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! You comment that your work has become predictable, but throughout your story I have found myself skipping passages of text, wanting to see what happens next. Your story is exhilarating and has been great from beginning to where I am now. I can’t wait to finish your story and see how it ends.

Actually I dont think clockwork would have argued at all. He argued and resisted when the observants wanted him to kill danny but when danny wanted to change the past he let danny do just that with only a warning about why he shouldn't , why he needed to solve the problem in the present. When you are asking clockwork yo do your dirty work he'll be like "lol fuck you, I'm doing this instead" but when you want to make a mistake with clockworks help he's like "ok go ahead and screw up just learn your lesson

I don't think Dani would think her sight was a joking matter. But of was a good chapter

Uh, Dark Phantom's real name is Dan. Dan Phantom.

Someone has got to make this and "The Return of Dani Phantom" into movies. Seriously, they're that good! :)

Since you really need my reviews, I'll really give'em to ya.I Iike the way how everything played out. Keep clam and write on!

In the third sentence second paragraph it's "threw" not throw because the sentence past that I want to be rude or obnoxious. Plus I really love the way you've put the story together it's as if Butch Hartman was writing it himself, but with a few personal touches by you which I like. Keep up the great work.

You are a great writer. And there are people out there that love your stories. Don't you forget that.

A nicely done sequel. The action and detail are nicely done and all the chapters have great drama in them. The bonding between Danny and Danielle is nicely done. All the charters emotions were greatly detailed and expressed. Nicely done!

'million dollar ghost' Has Danny talking to his dad from inside the vacuum cleaner thing, and they can both hear the other.

Can you put your books on Wattpad?

I laughed my head off when the guards said "Freeze" the Dani responded "Burn!" Your stories are descriptive and intriguing, but they are becoming a little too predictable. I love how well Dani and Danny have bonded!