i love this story

Loved it but do you have any other kigo stories?

Monique as Kim's Sidekick?
Even if she is only temping it is the first time I have read it.
Did they get the chip? You didn't say.

I prefer stories of slowly building attraction and romance.
But dumping readers in at the deep end can work.
Hopefully you put in some flashbacks to explain your KiGo.

As you said it is your first fanfic, keep trying.

LJ58 has some good stories, The Possible Factor is one.
THE BEAST WITHIN by Starvinglunatic is another.

I know this is an older post, but I'm newer to this site, and I absolutely love your story. I'm not usually one who likes american tv cartoons, but this is a cool pairing and I personally think you've done a great job with your storyline and flow. Thank you so very much and I hope you are still writing.

that was good really good

ha, I always thought that mrs. possible was a awesome mom.

Ok it's a nice and really funny story but it feels a little bit rushed ...

I did I found I very cute and well written

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I loved it epic job

A good story. An interesting AU take on the KiGo scenarios.
This yarn earns 4 out of six stars.
1 had to deduct 1 star for spelling errors.
2 had to deduct 1 star for wrong word usage.

I am telling you as one who reads many stories for many different authors. Please have someone proof read your chapter before you publish it. It will save you a lot of grief and make your work more professional looking.
I am saying this because i used to work for people who expected nothing less than perfect wording and format to whatever work I was doing.
I look forward to more stories from you.

Mothers will always embarrass you in front of: back and over others.
I figured but Izzy and Pam had something together due to their lack of reactions to their of love.

Please, Please use a better dictionary or thesaurus. You're killing me with your obvious errors.

It was an interesting chapter, although, not what i was expecting.
I have one major complaint though. Please re-read your chapters before you post.
The spelling errors are increasing and the wrong words are being used and it is VERY distracting.
i.e. cloths instead of clothes.
Other than that, i like your style of writing.
I used to be a copy editor/checker at work, which is why the misspellings/wrong word usage bug me.

Ong I love it!*-*