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WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. ...

I hope You continue this work, I've really enjoyed it. Love Shikamaru and Naruto. the way you portray their bonding is very good. thank you for sharing your story.

As much as Sasuke's character is improving, I'd want Team Oblivion to remain a duo! They're awesome together and their friendship is really amazing!

Sakura is such a b1tch! She didn't even apologize, had to audacity to be angry and started to beat Naruto!

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No mames :c

No hate on ur fic, its pretty good. But fuck this reminds me why i hated Pre Shippuden Naruto so fucking much, he was borderline retarded and couldnt shut the fuck up

Really fucking retarded

Is this going to get better? Shikamaru seems like a weird version of a bored tsundere and Naruto is just the dumb underdog. Everyone else is even less interesting, which is just mind blowing, to me.
I mean the summary sounded good and all but...

'Who's funeral is it?'
'You'll know when we get there.' I'm sorry but wtf?

He asked for the room number and then he makes a big deal out of visiting?
I don't understand Shikamaru's behaviour in this story, at all.

I really really like your story! Thanks for your work! I hope they meet Karin

I really miss this fic

I miss this

I always get annoyed when this happens in FanFiction, Naruto getting mad at Kakashi for not taking him in as a newborn.

1. He was like 14 when Minato died so obviously he wouldn’t be allowed to take care of him
2. Why would they let him? Imagine how easy it would be to connect the dots! Kakashi the former student of the fourth starts taking care of a baby that looks a lot like the fourth when you think about it
3. Poor kid was in mourning, lost his entire team in a span of like two years.
4. Who would trust him? I mean hello ABNU kakashi was an actual wreck

I thought that naruto would of matured a bit, but omg he is stupid as ever and as mature as a child stuck in their terrible twos. Lets see, your life and happiness or suffer with an impossible dream that will get you killed? Yeah the dumbass chose the latter. So This story isnt for me. To much like the canon, with the loudmouth barely trained idealistically naive wonderboy who wins the last minute because you know the fox. And the thing that never made sense is with all the abuse and neglect he still wants to die for them.