I am sorry. For all the time waste in reading three books. Only for you to show Neville killing Voldemort. That someone like Harry Potter who was always more of a leader than Neville was. More clear than him. Courageous. Turns a coward for fame! Idiotic and worst fan fiction possible for playing with at least one readers emotions. Because Hero of Harry Potter series and fan fictions was, is and always will be Harry Potter. NOT Neville Longbottom. He comes second. Not First!

So Remus realizes that he has to become more beast like to win over the werewolves, but once he beats Greyback he pulls back and stops? Malarkey. If he was truly embracing the wolf, showing mercy would not win him anything. He should have decapitated Greyback and put his head on a pike.

I really liked your series. But. When I turned to Book three, something made me see who was living at the end. Then I saw that you made Harry leave his world of support and all who loved him...so I decided that I would just stop. Better to stop with an unfinished story than one of complete tragedy where I will just be frustrated and sad. Too bad you did that. It could have been good.

What’s your opinion about Rockall? I think it is the ideal place to destroy anything with Fiendfyre (and yes, it is not original, Dumbledore destroyed there one Horcrux in The Accidental Animagus by White_Squirrel).

Really well written. This is what I thought A Marauders Plan would turn into. It’s a really nice change to canon.

This Epilogue is it's own story holy crap.
I love this fic!

That was hot

“Honestly Riddle, don’t you read?” is the most spectacular line I’ve ever heard from fanfic!Hermione.

Harry wanted to talk to Dumbledore abt Hallows and Horcruxes but ignores his summons because he cares abt what other people think abt him? I've tried but I don't think I can read this tosh any more. Stop writing a character has developed rational thinking nd then making them do irrational crap! I used to think that Jo left not jus holes but craters in her story and people would understand the opportunity to develop characters accordingly. This was a waste of my time.

I just read your entire trilogy in three days. I was late to work, burnt a batch of scones, and made my dog mad for ignoring him for too long. It was incredible.

Please don't write anymore long series - my work and my dog will suffer for it if you do.

You did an incredible job of creating real character depth and developing circumstances. I didn't read the very last chapter because I liked the happy ending, so thank you also for the clear warning.

Thanks again, it was a true pleasure to get lost in your story.

-QT

Before I read any malti book I read what happens in said books will I was going to read the first book but you fucked it up by pairing him with that back strapping cunt Hermione don't believe me 1) in goblet of fire she gave Harry Ron's message but when Harry asked her to give Ron a massage she tells him she is not a owl 2) in death hollows at the Lovegoods house when there are deatheaters there to save she lets the deatheaters see him when said deatheaters are looking for him to KILL HIM

Wow! This story was really long. Well written, but long! I'm happy to get so much extra story after where I thought you'd end. I think this is the first Hermione/Harry story that I've enjoyed the pairing as they aren't like canon characters.

I like the optional extra chaper very much. I will be envisioning Richard waking the magic in squibs to prevent some sort of muggles-discovering-magic apocalypse scenarios for the next week! It is a talented writer who can make a reader dream :)
I think you've written a very, very good story, and I thank you.

Oh my god! My heart is breaking. I love this scene between Harry and Hermione, it's so beautiful and vulnerable.

Aw, poor Sirius, and poor Richard! It pretty much always sucks to be the focus of a prophecy, or so all the stories like to tell me. I hope there's some hapiness in it for them, too. (And knowing Harry's luck, I just bet he'll somehow be in the thick of it, as usual.)

Okay, let me take one step back, first. I LOVE the ending! I enjoyed reading this entire series, but the last few chapters were the icing on the cake. I love the "Harry returns" trope, I can sometimes even do without the plot that went before as long as there's a painful exile and a warmer welcome than expected; and ideally some Harry being badass somewhere out there while trying to pull himself back together. This was all that and more and I love it! I actually cried when Sirius hugged Harry and I'd already had tears in my eyes when Teddy made his wish. Your writing got me right in the feels. Thank you! Really great stuff.

As for this last chapter: You said you aren't going to write it, but will you share a few plot points? Like, are the depths something like the Black Lake or the sea, and is the world beyond worlds Atlantis, a place behind the veil or some other parallel reality? And who are the sleepers? Inquiring minds want to know.

Anyway, once again: Thanks for sharing this brilliant story with us! I enjoyed it immensely.

- Dime