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OstaraNight chapter 9 . 12/5/2019 I don't know how to fully express how much I love this! The imagery, the characters and their development, the writing, and everything is just wonderful. Some favorite parts... The way Temari doesn't shy away from our hide from her scars and how they both handle them, the angst Shikamaru goes through but his determination for wanting her to be happy, the lemons (no surprise here), and the relationship between Kankuro and Shikamaru. Thank you so much for writing and sharing! |
Sand-Jounin-Tema chapter 1 . 9/13/2019 It's been years since I've been active on fanfiction, but I come back to this fic at least twice a year. Just want to let you know that it's still being appreciated! Hope you're living your best life. -SJT |
Sea Wan River chapter 1 . 3/11/2018 I'm in pain. I love it |
Seliee chapter 9 . 11/12/2017 This was so good, I cried! |
Amefist chapter 9 . 9/25/2017 This was amazing I cried |
Marquis.De.Lafayette7023 chapter 4 . 8/16/2017 i feel so bad for shikamaru, i want to cry |
Axel0913 chapter 9 . 3/17/2017 I loved this so much! Seriously Shikamaru's relationship with Kankuro and Gaara was adorable. And he and Temari absolutely perfect! Your such a great writer, legit I love all your ShikaTema stories |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2016 *Hiashi *Kakuzu (I guess his name rhymes with Zabuzu, but HIS name's actually Zabuza) Yep, Shikamaru can be sexist. That's canon, unfortunaly. I was unprepared for that orientalist/downright disrespectful and fetishizing comment related to Temari's "exotic, barbaric" look, though. Wow. Everyone who isn't white must've felt so happy reading this. |
BronBoop chapter 9 . 7/14/2015 Just wanted to let you know that this is one of my favorite ShikaTema fics ever. Whatever you're up to, I hope you're still writing :) you truly are a talented story teller. |
bluej4y chapter 1 . 11/16/2014 This is my most favorite story ever, thanks! |
temari4689 chapter 9 . 12/14/2013 god bless you. i have 10 million feels that just grow exponentially. i can't thank you enough. this reading experience was truly something to remember. |
temari4689 chapter 8 . 12/14/2013 "maybe love was just a special kind of craziness" amazing |
temari4689 chapter 7 . 12/14/2013 "his blood was on fire" such a good description |
temari4689 chapter 5 . 12/14/2013 this story is good as hell the opening really captures the hopeless aggravation Shikamaru must be feeling in such a situation, complete with incredible imagery. "excuse himself until it stopped hurting" you really make the readers ship shikatema to ease this pain you convey emotions so well. you defend your facts with attitudes of characters. when gaara and kankuro stand up and their chairs fall back I really see how much the sand siblings really care for each other. when gaara says nee-San |
temari4689 chapter 4 . 12/14/2013 this story will simultaneously make my heart cry and make we cry out of how good this writing is god damn |