That was just beautiful.

You have far richer prose than Stephanie herself... Time to write your own supernatural romance! You could do it so well!

Great oneshot! I've read loads and loads of Honeymoon oneshots some better than is a very good one!

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Aww

I loved it! Especially all of the details, it felt like I was Bella! Very well done!

really really very good you should write more !

nicola

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very nice ;P

and hot!

I love the romantic parts too!

amazing, i wish she had put this in the book lol :)

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Wow- this was so incredibly lovely! It flowed so well and was SO incredibly Edward and Bella. Too many of the "fade to black" scenes are raunchy and so out of character that it loses the feel of the books. Thanks for keeping it true to the book and the characters- this is beautiful and passionate without being out of character and raunchy. Nicely done!

Wow, just wow! That is exactly how it should have been written in Breaking Dawn!

I'm going to echo everyone's sentiments and say that this is so tenderly sweet and so very Bella-and-Edward-like. Incredibly sexy without being raunchy.

Oh my that was just beautiful. Incredibly evocative, arousing and just breathtakingly beautiful. Wow.

Wow, what a beautiful story. One of the best interpretations I've read of the infamous fade-to-black scene in BD. It was emotional, sensual and really took the characters back to the beginning of their love story, which I've never seen done before. Thanks so much for sharing your story and your writing talent, I thoroughly enjoyed myself!

That was so incredibly sweet and tasteful and oh so very sexy and hot without being too cheesy and Harlequin-esque, as they say. I loved that. Thanks for sharing. I may just have to print that out and place it in between the pages of the epic fade-to-black cockblock on Isle Esme.

nice job