Ya it not your fault for that. It their dam fault for reading these types of fanfic that is rated M. No one told them to read it.

Yes, the word "kisama" is a rude term for "you" in Japanese. Say kisama to a Japanese person, and you'll get into a heep of trouble. As in trouble, I mean a fist fight. This is what my sis told me

*Sighs* Figures I find a good story and its moved. You're stuff is really good.

I Loved the Story!

Nice chap!

Yami

#make a sad face.. My I know your lj account please?

#too speechless to say anything

Overall the story is so interesting to me.. Especially yami and Seto's moment 3 tehee..

well.. a note from me.. I think your story move too fast... I mean.. yami and yugi just got separated at night.. How did kaiba know their body had been separated? I Was at lost there..

don't consider it as an offense ne? I really like your story..

who's coming? is it kaiba? #excited

well.. as much as I loved the moment when they are together.. I still feel sorry for yami..

oh yugi.. you really had no idea of what yami had been thorugh

poor yami... He must be really distressed...
Uuuhhh.. I really wonder what will kaiba do next time..

In this chapter, they had 2 different body now?
wow..

Oh so.. from this chapter on, you'll read the whole story? 3

I'm so excited to read your fanfic... It made my day!
your fic trully cheer me up.. today I woke up from a weird nightmare.. and then I had to bear some problem with my friends which made me stress... I just decided to read ffn.. and here.. you made my day.. thanks so much.. 'D

Hommuuuuuu! I really love this story..
Though.. in the part where kaiba shut yami's mouth, it's kinda different from what I've thought (then again, I watched the doujin in spanish and I don't understand spanish)

From what I see on your an.. it looks like you download the doujin? may I know the link to download the doujin? Pleaseeee... #puppyeyes
I've been looking for it but couldn't find one...

I realize something.. I've read a similar story before..
I remember it's a doujinshi from youtube..

but then I read your story.. I was thinking..
are you perhaps the one who make the doujin? or this story is based on the doujin?

either way, I really love the story.. And I really love your fic D
gotta read it!

Thank you for continuing this storie_

Plz make the next chapter soon can't wait

I'm sorry it isn't turning out well for you. I hope it hasn't discouraged you from continueing your fics. I've been waiting for an update but I understand how trying it is when sites make it difficult.

Is there any updates that have happened that we wouldn't have been told about? I'd like to catch up if there are any