Awwww, that was awesome! Please continue!

awesome

Yes, indeed, because Papa Bear Gibbs has a protective streak three miles wide and a stubborn one to match. Excellent chapter!

Nicely written. Gibb's care of Tony shows in his actions. Hope you can continue with the story.

would like to see this story finished

I loved this! Great job!

This is so well written! It would be a shame for you not to continue!

Hi,

Is this abandoned? Are you planning on finishing it through the second season's final episode? Just curious - because it would be worth reading.

Thanks to the good read,

Vi

I know you didn't promise that it would be a quick update...but it has been over a year. Not to mention those that read this when you first posted it must be up a wall because we ALL know what happens next and you doing all this from Gibbs' POV...I personally REALLY want to read more. Any chance you can come back and continue this soon...pretty please. I give what you have so far a 5/5

Want more please more!

I really like this! One of my favorite pairs of episodes from NCIS, until the whole Ari thing. Anyway, this was written fantastically too, I wish my writing flowed as nicely as yours does. I love how you describe each seen and whats going on, like in Tonys falling, but don't stretch it out to long. You know how to move from scene to scene smoothly, not a crack to be seen _. I don't know if there's more to this story or not, but it's really good. I'm going to subscribe just in case :D ~Nayah

I loved SWAK and Twilight. Awesome episodes. And I love your story even more for giving them commentary. Keep up the good work and update soon, please!

can u do the rest of this eppisode plz?

You need to write the next chapter! I really like this

Very good chapter! Hope you do update soon!