this story is interesting so far. it is good.

goodness, it's likw whenever i read fics i always read the ones that have french or russian in it. i can't wait for the next part!

this is really good please keep writing

I'm so glad you've got back to writing this. I saw it in my inbox this morning and it about made my day:)

I love seeing the contrast between Specs and Race. I'm really looking forward to more character development with Race too, so we can see that he's more than just a short tempered little Italian:P

Aw, poor Riley, always getting picked on. Fantastic chapter, as usual. I can't wait to read more~

(Sorry for the short review! I really should go study for my Japanese midterm now!)

Yay for another great chapter! I love the "half-smile for the half-pint". I'm sorry I've been slacking so much on reviewing. ;; I will try to do better in the future.

As I've said many times, I adore your use of the accent in your writing. When he called her "Orly" I nearly fell over giggling. I also love this part: "In truth, he wasn’t all that slow-minded, his mind was just racing too fast for him to slow down and arrive at the logical conclusion." It gives a whole new meaning to his name.

~Luna

Ok. Few things.

1) Glad you didn't give up on it.

2) Can't wait to see what the next chapter's gonna bring.

3) I sure wish I knew French [[although, I wanna learn Italian more]] So I could understand what she's REALLY saying

CTB & STD!

Polaroid/Angel

WOW! I love it!

Scratch Conlon

Good story update soon.

I can't believe this chapter has been up for half a month and I haven't been able to read it. Great chapter; I can't tell you how much I enjoy the accurate portrayal of the Newsies and boys in general. It's little things like this that keep me sane, and I like my sanity, so keep writing. ;)

I really like this story so far. It's a lot different from those Mary-Sues and cliches we see all the time nowadays here. Plus, Racemances are the best. So keep it up. D

-Scuff

hehe i just love specs, he's so smart. it's cute how they try to pronounce her name.

The update notice in my inbox made me smile. It's good to see you back. :)

"I was sleeping until you tried to get fresh,mister." Oh, yeah, that goes down as one of the funniest lines I've read in a fan fic.