That was so cute and awkward. :D Kudos to Jean for getting her before Roy. Ha!

oh i love it

please pllllllllease make another one but for riza pov

get them together

Now I wish Jean was my first, he was so sweet good fic

I loved it. So awkward and sweet, and it just so adorable. Love love love.

This was really good, and really well written. Although, I'm not a Jean x Riza fan, I really enjoyed it. The only thing I didn't like was the ending, when Jean is reflecting, it's sad.

I love how this is light-hearted, and so very awkward :p. Keep up the good work!

nice!

I love the flashback aspect of the story. You did a very good job of illustrating the awkward shyness of the first time.

Wow, now I really really enjoyed this _

I just happened to be looking for Jean/Riza fics and found this one was pretty new, awesome.

Interesting setup you have here, with the story being a whole trip down memoy lane, after years and years later, and something that Roy can't have.

I love the way you really emphasized their awkwardness and rewards as well, perfectly adorable with both of them so much younger and curious.

Plus the ending is pretty funny, but also rather bittersweet as well, the perfect combo.

Just a few typos here and there, but nothing to be worried about.

Anyway, really enjoyed it and will be adding it to favs.