An absolutely delightful story. Extremely well executed and imagined.

Actually, I thought that Ginny’s reaction was spot on! Very nice story up to now. Will comment again at the end of the story.

This was a beautiful story. I loved the way the length of the story allowed the characters of the children to develop and how everyone learned to love and trust just that little bit more! I was lucky enough to find this when it was completed, so managed to binge read in a couple of days. Thank you so much for sharing.

Ok, is the author 12? What the fuck is up with her dads reaction? Holy fuck, this is retarded. I'm out.

This was possibly one of the most beautiful fanfics I’ve read. Thanks you

there is something so undeniably breathtaking about this story. you have a way of making the reader feel like they're there. it was so purely and innocently beautiful. I love the thought of already having everything you ever wanted. what a wonderful feeling. I've read this story several times, and each time I am struck by your talent. congratulations on a truly masterful work.

Discovered this sweet story yesterday and read it straight through, despite cooking/eating meals and other real life requirements. You may have written this story 10 years ago, but it's charm shines just as brightly now.

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one of the most beautiful stories I have had the pleasure of reading. great job.

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A truly heart-warming story. I think all of the kids spoke and acted a little too maturely for their age, but it was still a great read nonetheless. THe pace was perhaps a little unrealistic, everything developing within a year, but easy to overlook. Last mild critique-but-not-really-critique, you have a mild tendency for the usual boy/girl stereotypes with the kids.

Anyway, it does little do dampen the joy of the story.

You have an excellent way with characterisations and making us fall in love with characters. I would never expect a fanfic to make me fall in love with SEVEN new characters, but you did exactly that and it was so lovely to read. They're all such distinctly different people, too. I found myself thinking from chapter to chapter that 'no, this is my favourite child' and changing my mind each time I learned mre and honestly I still don't know which is my favourite, they're all fantastic.

Question, what was the plan for any more children that arrived at St. Mungo's?

Harry/Hermione's relationship was also nice. I'm not a fan of the whole immediate-marriage-waiting-for-marriage stuff but you write it well.

LOVED Ginny and Ron. You balanced their annoying qualities with their lovable loyalty in a great way. I would have liked to see more Luna, especially scenes between she and Dusty - both of them see things others don't.

Interesting that they're going to take Teddy in, too. EIGHT kids and probably a biological one is wild.. I wonder can you really know and look after that many kids as well as work?

Anyway. What a mean to say is thank you for this story, it is terribly endearing and lovely and heartwarming. It's always lovely to see children be loved and cared for.

Thank you!
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