omg please update! I need to know what happens next! I always knew there was something fishy about norman

Nick Spagian is an anagram for King Caspian
Love that btw ;)

Take your time, this is really a great story.

My absolute favorite Narnia fanfic. I love how you stay true to the Biblical aspects of this. Susan is my FAVORITE character and I’m so happy to see her chance at redemption. I love the dreams that she and Caspian have, I love the relationship between the Pevensies that you describe. It’s so great to see a story that stays true to Lewis’ intentions, rather than it just being a romance story. It’s so much deeper than that. I hope you continue this (no pressure!) because I’m dying to see what will happen if Susan remembers and if she ever becomes reunited with her family! Such a great fanfic! And yes, we’ll be patient and supportive. Good luck and God bless!

As a lover of Narnia and CS Lewis I am loving this story. You have done an amazing job working on this story and having it work so well with the originals. I find Norman Mallory to be especially annoying, but obviously thats the point. I look forward to more, hopefully soon. All the best, Meghan

Oh my gosh I was beginning to lose hope that you wouldn't update! I'm so glad you did! And that creepy guy, well I thought he was just a creep but the fact that he is looking for other worlds...maybe ge knows about Susan? That'd be so interesting.

So, while re-watching Prince Caspian the other day, I was thinking of your story, and thought it might be fun to re-read it. Imagine my surprise when there were more chapters!

I am so enjoying how your plot is developing, and I am glad that you have promised to finish it eventually. I love the little details you have that anchor the story to the time and setting of the original books (like the new Yellow Fever vaccine, for example). I also appreciate that you’ve stayed so true to Lewis’s allegorical style and theology.

Loved the reveal that Norman is looking for other worlds! I knew he was interested in Susan for his research, but I thought it might have been something more mundane. Of course he’s looking for other worlds. I’m suspecting some sort of relation to the original Magician. I’m just not sure where Mrs. Ainran comes into it (don’t think I didn’t notice the significance of THAT name!) And Ursula... I wish we knew what else she’d been going to tell Susan, but I expect she’ll be back.

Anyway, I’m glad you’re still around and updating (however slowly: I know how hard it can be sometimes). I look forward to the next installment.

Oh my goodness I’ve always felt unsatisfied with the ending of the last battle and Susan’s fate of still being alive. I do understand that ivy not letting her die it shows that she still can Choose Aslan and Narnia, just like those of us left behind still get to choose Jesus and eternal life. I love how you haven’t taken the Bible outta context.. Norman i figured out that he’s looking for the magic rings... I hope you keep updating! You are truly talented.. Mist people are terrible at writing Narnia because the forget the real meanings behind the books! Keep it up!

It's very lovely! Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it's ready

Do you plan to finish this fic? This is one of the most beautiful post-book fic that I've read, and I would have loved to see how it panned out.

Thank you, thank you for updating! I don't even care if this story takes 20 years from start to finish. It will be worth it.

love it

Excellent, I do hope you'll finish, it's 11 in years at this point :D

I was very glad to see another chapter of this story! I feared it had been abandoned. I would have liked to have seen more of Susan's reaction to Norman's speech (and more of that speech's contents) as well the rest of Ursula's conversation. Despite this, I very much enjoyed the update and hope you continue and finish the story.

Beautiful Story. I love what you're doing with it, and can't wait to see more.