This was really beautiful, and wonderfully written! You did an incredible job writing this story and it was really in character. Great job adding in Jasper's self loathing, you made it perfectly and worked it all together into a flawless, beautiful story that is divine in its epicness!

Nice Story! You mentioned that you like raven/ trevor from Vampire Kisses. Could you possibly write something with them in it? (If you want to of course!) I am slightly obsessed with this pairing at this point and there are not nearly enough stories with the two of them.

This is amazing! GREAT work!

I'd really love to know how it all really went down, so I love reading these types of stories. I especially like that you've done it in Jasper's point of view. He is a very intriguing character. It was extremely well-written, and I love that you were able to portray all the emotions that the both of them were feeling. I loved it!

This was great! I loved it, also how you built the story. I adore Alice and Jasper and I have read many of their "first encounters" and I liked it when it is done like you did it and not too fast and too forward. :) Great job!

i enjoyed the story. i often wondered how that exchange would have gone. i think you did an excellent job with it. i liked how it was told in jaspers point of view.