I think that should be "resolved" not "resigned".

Hey I know it's been a long time since you updated this but please (imagine me begging on my knees) could you carry on writing this story...

Okay I just thought that I overdid a bit with my review earlier.
Please know that those are only suggestions you asked for at the end of chapter 24 :)
Your story is GREAT, KEEP GOING :D

BTW: Who made up the rule about only one review per chapter? Posting this for chapter 23 instead of 24 doesn't make any difference... :)

Awesome story, I love the idea of a teambuilding camp! I also have a few rough ideas:
- another exercise could be that each team is blindfolded and then led somewhere in the forest, to find their way back to camp, without any stuff to help them. You could bring up Ziva's past, because in one episode we learned that Eli David used to do that with his children, and also Gibbs' past, because I'm pretty sure you learn a few useful tricks in the Core

-also I think it would be pretty cool to do something with McGee's fear of heights. Maybe they have to jump from a plane with a parachute. Gibbs could take McGee and Ziva could take Tony. I don't think it would be realistic that they would make Abby do something like that, since she's not an Agent.

-my last idea: maybe if you want Abby and McGee to have a bit of a major part in one exercise: I
suppose whoever makes up the games knows their files, so they know that McGee and Abby are good with computers and Gibbs is the Team Leader. So maybe there could be something like an electronically functioning mine field or booby trapped obstacle course/maze. They could make Tony and Ziva go through the course, while Abby and McGee try to disarm most of the dangers while Gibbs has to lead them through the maze and past the traps via intercom.

Okay, that were some of my ideas, I hope I could explain them in some understandable way ( what makes sense in my head most of the times is just rubbish for others ;))
please continue the story, that would be great!
NCISJenny167
Greetings

I'm counting on you to continue this for the love of my sanity! Pleaseeeeee

Like this is seriously so funny and on point I can't cope haha

Are you somewhat a shrink?

I don't know who you are I don't know how you do it but I know you're freaking amazing omg
This is SERIOUSLY the best interpretation of team Gibbs I've EVER read! Huge compliment there *bows*

More please

Please Update! I LOVE this story and I am dying to know what happenes. But I suppose you're not gonna update since it's been 4 years! But we all hope in miracles! If you see this PLEASE update!

This story started off really well - and now that the KISS has happened, its run out of steam and there has been nothing for 4 years!

And if you are wondering about my rants against Abby in my reviews - well that just tells you how GOOD the writing was.

The more emotionally involved I get with the writing, the more I want to write what I feel, and when I get really emotional, that means the writing was EXCELLENT. I just wish this story could have been completed.

See what I mean McGee - Abby commands - Mcgee, tell tony...
and you obey like a good little slave -
When are you going to get some BACKBONE and SAY NO to the bitch?

Abby abby abby - no wonder you are not married - You would be telling the whole world about every detail of every sex session you ever had - NO MAN would want to stay with someone who cannot keep things personal and private!

McGee you really need to stay away from Abby

Gibbs - please explain why this gossipy manipulative bitch is your favourite? I have no respect for her whatsoever!

LOL I like that - write one smutty kiss and you get 50 reviews - I think that is hilarious!

But otherwise - you see what I mean about Abby being a whiny manipulative bitch? She (like Tony) will NOT take NO for an answer. I detest Abby.

If McGee has any sense he will run far away from Abby - and stay away.
Abby will be the one wearing the pants in their relationship - actually she already is wearing the pants - Anything she says Mcgee does.

see McGee - great idea!

Elsa needs independent verification that the kiss actually happened.

of course she is scared - she tells herself lies all the time and cannot even tell the truth to herself...