So the story so far is great i laugh all the time , but what i need to say about this chapter is, you could have put some spicy tinhgs on it. For example when brennan was in her way to the bathroom to have a shower you could have prolonged the story a little bit and writte some sensual stuff.
But so far I'm really liking the story.

One of my favorites chapters
Sexual and funny at the same time

FFA

Please Update.
I just started reading this story and I really want you to finish it please

Miyasawaex-Moonlight,

First,I'd like to introduce myself. My name is MyOwnHorn2. Though I'm not new to this FanFiction site(specifically),I've read many of these stories/watched much television over the years. Each one has been both entertaining and very enjoyable.

Not long ago,I came across your FanFiction page. While there,I discovered one of your Bones-based stories. It was entitled "What Happens In Vegas."

As I've been reading "What Happens In Vegas",several areas stuck out. 1. This is a deeply emotional, poignant and powerful drama,built on a slowly-evolving and multi-layered storyline. 2. You allow us to see(deeply)into Booth,Brennan,Parker,and their families and coworkers(as real,emotional characters.) 3. In each chapter,you weave a good balance of emotion and background information. 4. You help us to deeply understand how intertwined Booth and Brennan's lives have become. Whether as partners at work or a married couple,you show us several perspectives. Each is unique and fresh. 5. You help us appreciate the individual view(s) that define Brennan and Booth. Each is their own person. Together,they must mesh them together to make it work. 6. This story progresses well. It moves at a slow and varied pace. We can follow their journey as it unfolds.

One particular area fascinated me. In the first few chapters,Brennan learns that she married Booth(in a Vegas Wedding Chapel.) At the time,she and Booth were there(working on a case.) Given her long-standing views,her "marriage" comes as a strange surprise. Evenso,the more she learns about how and why her life has changed,she is more willing and accepting. Even with the rough areas,she knows this. She loves Booth and she knows Booth truly loves her. Whatever their lives bring them,they will face it together.

Miyasawaex-Moonlight,I was wondering. Have you any plans on completing(or expanding on) this story? What happens to Booth and Brennan? With Brennan now pregnant,does her inner feelings(on soon becoming a mother)improve at all? Does Brennan have a boy or girl? Would they face any new challenges,besides raising children together? These are some questions that came to my mind.

I need for you know something(on a personal note.) In several chapters,I read your personal experiences. Also,I read what you said(on the death of your friend,Carol.) Please know that I appricate your courage and willingness to be open about them. In my life,I've also had some bad and negative times. I agree. Expressing how you really feel helps. It helps to get sunshine in your world(even when your struggling.) Life can be better one day.

Finally,please know that you're a great writer. This specific story(among your several others)allow your creative talent and spirit to shine through. Please keep up the good work.

Miyasawaex-Moonlight,please E-mail me in response to what I've shared above. Thank you for taking the time to read and respond. Have a nice day.

Sincerely,

MyOwnHorn2

I wouldn't have thought bones would have blame both tho

I know that it has been about 4 years and all, but I really like this story and I was wondering when you were going to update it.

Oi Juli! Bem, como eu vi que você é brasileira, assim como eu, e meu inglês é muito deficiente, rsrs, então resolvi escrever em português mesmo, espero que não se importe.
Primeiro, gostaria de dizer que amei o enredo da fic! Imaginei cada detalhe que você escreveu e simplesmente adorei! Você escreve bem pra caramba. Só fiquei triste porque você parou de atualizar.. :(
A fic é maravilhosa, você é uma ótima escritora, com certeza já tem muitos fãs seguindo sua fic, então, por favor, não desiste dessa estória.
Continua. :D
Quanto àquele seu probleminha, espero, de coração, que você esteja bem, assim como nos falou no último capítulo postado.
Bem, a decisão de continuar é sua, só queria que soubesse que eu ADOREI, AMEI, VICIEI nesta sua fanfic, e desejo com todas as forças que você volte a escrevê-la.
Beijos da sua mais nova fã, Michelle. *-*

As usual I loved this story too, I can only hope you will continue with it , just like your other fics, I am praying that you update!rs... POR FAVOOOOOOOR""""

Where I can find your fic in Spanish or Portuguese?, Please, is that I can ller in English: (

I love your story, let me translate into Spanish if people who do not know English can also enjoy it if you would like to send me a message the traduciera private

Atualiza Faces, por favor! Vontade imensa de saber ocmo a história acaba, eu sei que o site desconfigurou tudo, mas o final é tãaao importante que a gente não se incomoda!

Espero de coração que tudo esteja bem e a fase ruim tenha passado como uma matéria péssima q a gente paga na faculdade (pra nunca mais voltar). D

hey, just read it! It sounds like a really hard time for you! I hope you're better now! :D

yaay! im a new reader and i absolutely love your work! :D i only read this one and fever so far (which is amazing as well) and im really sorry to hear about what happened with you, but im glad you're feeling better! hope you update soon! :D

I'm sorry for all you went through, but I'm glad that you are fine now. You are a very talented writter and I'm glad that you decided to continue this fic. I love it, it's one of my favorites. I'll be patiently waiting for your next update, but I hope it will be pretty soon.