| Reviews for Koutarou Star |
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Teenie chapter 11 . 11/22/2012 wHY don't you upload here anymore? i like the story! |
MeiMei chapter 11 . 11/11/2012 You've officially killed me... I sincerely hope you do update because not knowing what is about to happen is torture at its finest. Now try not knowing for 3 years. *sigh* I hope you do update eventually. On another note... When she looked up again, Akaba was wearing a tiny smile. "That sounds like a good plan. Just don't become so focused on that path that you close off all others." HE LIKES HER. I KNEW IT. I KNOW IT. I HAD MY SUSPICIONS AT FIRST BUT NOW I'M ABSOLUTELY POSITIVE. (Again, they wouldn't be bad as a couple, but I'm still Kouta/Juri ALL DA WAY. It'd be nice if you put in some uber cute, sexy moments between the two of them.) I know Julie is waiting for him to get closure, but they both like each other? Couldn't they have some more toe curling moments together? I understand, the pace of this story is set to be slow, but it's reeeealllly slow and I've grown impatient for more Kouta/Juri moments since they're so far and few between! (When they were alone in the room together, I thought for sure something hot was gonna happen. And though something beautiful did happen, I wish there could have been some more, ya know?) Anyway, I've reached the last chapter and eagerly await the next time you review! Now that I've read all 11 chappies and reviewed on them all, I'll go back and reread the whole story! UPDATE! IM NOT GONNA ASK NICELY ANYMORE! UPDATE NOW! ITS BEEN 3 DAMN YEARS! |
MeiLi-chan chapter 10 . 11/11/2012 Ahhhhhh and now the plot is officially revealed? :'( There's one more chapter left since you last updated and there hasn't been any real Koutarou/Julie UST! WHERE IS IT?! I'm still waiiiiiitttttiiiiinnnnnggggg g! You're Hiruma seemed kinda OOC... That's not a bad thing, it was just interesting to note how different he is from how I perceived him in the manga. But it wasn't a bad Hiruma; just different. As always, please update! It's been three years! You could update at least one chapter? Please? Pretty please? Pretty please with a cherry on top? |
Mei Li chapter 9 . 11/11/2012 Oh yeah lol, and I totally see what you did there with the King MUKURO Pineapple! You so da funnayyyy! |
Mei Li chapter 9 . 11/11/2012 ITS HIRUMA! HIRUMA IS IN THIS STORY! AHAHAHAHHAHA! When I saw the 'Kekeke' I started to laugh in excitement! Once again, you've managed to completely throw a socket wrench in the plot! I totally did not expect Akaba and Koutarou to be half bros! I really didn't expect that! I have a request. I know it may not be the order or timing you planned for the story, but I was wondering if you could accentuate the Koutarou/Julie sexual tension a bit more. I dunno, like add more maybe? Or reinforce their moments so that people curl their toes in excitement only to crumble and almost die when it doesn't go anywhere. IDK. Sorry, it's a lame suggestion, but I thought I'd ask anyway. As always, please update! I know you'll be back! |
Mei-kun chapter 8 . 11/11/2012 O.o You know for a second there, you had me thinking the same thing as Julie. That maybe Akaba had a thing for Koutarou. Not that that's bad... (to be honest that would be purtty sexy) You took me by surprise! I didn't expect them to get stranded on a deserted island! You threw a monkey wrench right at the plot! I'm interested to see how you'll play this out now. As always, please update! I know you'll come back! It's only been three years! You must still think of your story! |
Meimei chapter 7 . 11/11/2012 Akaba took a step closer and placed his hand on her shoulder. "It's an undeniable part of being human to feel jealous when the person you are infatuated with is infatuated with someone else. What matters is how we handle it." (Why do I still feel like for some reason, Akaba is holding back his feelings for her?) AHHHHH! SHIZZZZZ! THEY FELL OVERBOARD! I must admit. I was pretty surprised that the whole Jessica thing ended so quickly. It's not bad per se cuz now my KoutaJuri will finally have a chance to be together! But it did kind of feel a little rushed. Oh well. I've only read 7 chapters. Can't wait for the next four! I'm excited to see how you play this out. As always, please update! XD |
Mei chapter 6 . 11/11/2012 You know a good sign of writing is when the reader actually responds wholeheartedly to the story. And let me tell you now, I've responded quite well to this chapter. I already loathe Jessica. I feel like I'm in Julie's shoes: trying hard to accept and understand the girl dating the guy you like, but too exasperated and annoyed at her to be able to make the full effort. Another great chapter! Some might think it didn't add to the plot, but au contraire, this chapter actually gave some insight into the way the mind of Julie works and the torture she is essentially putting herself through by trying to maintain her friendship with Koutarou. It's actually a bit upsetting :( It's like in her mind the only way to keep the friendship is by befriending his bimbo girlfriend though it pains her immensely to have to hang out with the girl who snatched up the guy she likes. She's very mature in this story and I appreciate how you didn't turn Julie into a sniveling, whining girl who behaves as if she's lost everything once Koutarou was taken. I hope her character development remains solid and she doesn't become weak cuz I rather like this Julie. I like her a lot! Liked this chapter tons! And as always, please update XD |
Mei-kun chapter 5 . 11/11/2012 And thus, the plot thickens. I love how Akaba is still so sensible, but why do I get the underlying feeling that he feels something more for Juri? (Not that that'd be all that bad. They'd be a cute couple in their own way, though my FEELS ARE ONLY FOR JULIE AND KOUTAROU!) It's so interesting how now Julie is pining after him... I'm interested in seeing how this plays out. As always, I do hope you review soon! |
Mei chapter 4 . 11/11/2012 Hahaha I totes saw this coming! I KNEW IT WOULD HAPPEN! Thank you for doing that! IT'S PERFECT! "You didn't get lei'd?" - This sentence made me laugh too. At first I thought he said 'laid' and I did a double take! I hope you update soon. I'm quickly approaching chap 11 and I don't like waiting for years for a new chappie. |
Mei-sama desu chapter 3 . 11/11/2012 I am in love with this story. There is something confusing though. The time skips are huge and all over the place and it confuses me. Maybe you could tell us at the beginning of the chapter? This is still very well written and I can't wait to read more! (I also hope in the future, you'll decide to update.) |
Mei-Mei chapter 2 . 11/11/2012 Lol! I love this story! It's slowly, but surely building up! Can't wait for the big moments! |
Mei-chan chapter 1 . 11/11/2012 "The voice he produced was unlike anything Julie had ever heard before, rich and smooth, like coffee-flavored ice cream, and as intoxicating as liquor. Her heart galloped as he made love to the microphone." Holy hell... That is orgasm inducing writing right there... I could literally hear his voice... |
Mei chapter 1 . 11/11/2012 FINALLY A JULIE AND KOTAROU FANFIC! THANK GOODNESS! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! I DONT EVEN CARE IF YOU HAVENT UPDATED FOR THREE YEARS IM JUST GLAD I FOUND A STORY ABOUT THEM! I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU. That being said... CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE. ITS BEEN 3 YEARS! Oh, And I love you XD |
coolberyl chapter 11 . 1/19/2011 Oh man, I am in love with this story. Eyeshield 21 doesn't really give Julie too much of a personality, but you definitely managed to get around that and give her her own personality, while still faithfully sticking to Koutarou and Akaba's entertaining quirks. Your story is so much fun to read! |