Reviews for Eden In A Box 2
drucindastorm chapter 14 . 6/7/2019
loved it it was awesome perfection fantastically fabulous and brilliant I love it
Andi chapter 14 . 5/19/2019
Amazing! Any chance you’d still be willing to write some for the Ironman ‘verse? I’ve been rereading all of your Ironman fic since ‘Endgame’ as a pick-me-up. If you’ve got any other plot bunnies bouncing around, my shattered post-‘Endgame’ soul
Brrum chapter 14 . 1/20/2019
My god, this has been the best thing I've ever read. More addicting than the movies themselves. I have responsibilities in life but I spent two weekends nolifing and reading Eden In a Box 1&2. Too bad this was written years ago and you're not writing anymore - but maybe one last story after Endgame?
Guest chapter 14 . 10/18/2018
Por favor seguir la historia
wanderlustnyc chapter 1 . 8/15/2018
Great and funny first chapter to kick things off. 2 things had me literally LOL:

1) Seeing has how you tagged this in movies (and I really am only familiar with the movieverse) that means GP as Pepper. So, when you wrote Rhodey picturing Pepper with Brad Pitt and Ben Affleck, I just burst out laughing. For some reason I get a kick out of writers doing that. I mean, I dunno if younger fans know or if people even remember Brad and Ben as Gwyneth's exes. Hahaha!

2) Jarvis's "shitless".

You rock my socks!
wanderlustnyc chapter 14 . 8/15/2018
This was yet another wonderful read from an amazing author. I can't tell you enough how much I love your writing. Your way with words, expressions, descriptions...

You are one talented writer. The way you write their dialogue/banter/conversation is eargasmic. Hahaha! I mean, it's so them and the reader is able to actually hear their voices. Your ability to word imagery; the visually stimulating paragraphs allow the reader to see what's not in front of them.

I feel like I'm watching a webisode or tv series when I read your fics. Your works fill in the gaps the movies (or movie since this was before IM2) leave out, or create a whole new universe for the reader to immerse themselves in. Oh, and...domesticity at it's finest. Besides the usual supporting characters, the new ones you have incorporated into Eden are a perfect fit. Oh, and the fact that Tony retains "Snuggles" as Pepper's pet name from their first date out is love.

It was a pleasure to read both Eden in a Box stories. Thank you, for sharing them with us. I am a fan of the awesomeness that is Cincoflex.
wanderlustnyc chapter 7 . 8/15/2018
Oh what a visually satisfying chapter.

1) Your description of the photgraphs is amazing. I wanna see them true to form. Are they real; like based off a real photo shoot? If not, well damn, your mind and the imagery you conjure up is wow.

2) Oh, Jarvis. *high five...if one can high five the AI*

3) Hot.
wanderlustnyc chapter 1 . 8/15/2018
(Grrrr...my comments are having issues being posted; sorry if this comes up twice. I actually commented last night but until now it hasn't posted.)

Great and funny first chapter to kick things off. 2 things had me literally LOL:

1) Since this is tagged in the movies section, it means movieverse...which means GP as Pepper. So, when Rhodey mentions picturing Pepper with Brad Pitt and Ben Affleck I just burst out in laughter. For some reason, I'm amused when authors write them in. Dunno if new fans are aware or if people don't remember that Brad and Ben were Gwyneth's exes. Hahaha. Anyways...

2) Jarvis's "shitless".
Sooooodamngood chapter 1 . 5/26/2018
Just finish the first one, excited to embark on the second! Hopefully you are considering churning some Pepperony baby fics out now that IW is over. Love your Pepperony fics, please continue to write this amazingly, always! Thank you so much!
PlainOlWriter chapter 14 . 4/12/2016
i really wished this had a part 3
LillyHalliwell chapter 14 . 1/2/2015
Loved part two!
LillyHalliwell chapter 10 . 12/30/2014
Really curious to what's #23! Love part two!
madison chapter 14 . 12/25/2014
So beautiful. :) Your Pepperony fics are some of my all-time favorites; fics that I keep re-reading. I love the depth & life you give to Tony & Pepper & their world. I love that as I was re-reading Eden 1 & just now finished Eden 2; today is Christmas day & the holiday season is a big part of the storyline for Eden 2. Reading about Tony & Pepper happy & in love surrounded by loved ones, celebrating Christmas on actual Christmas day is a wonderful, heartwarming treat.
Thank you, & please keep writing for Tony & Pepper.
Happy Holidays!
Minadalrive chapter 14 . 11/23/2014
That was such a nice and sweet and amazingly well thought story! Thank you for the hard work you put in there! Xxx
Minadalrive chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
Funny as hell, especially Jarvis interventions :)
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