Greetings, here's hoping that this review finds you well, and still writing! I am glad I gave this fic a chance, as it was recommended by another author in his fic, kingkakashi, is the author, and I am glad I read it, I rather enjoyed the plot, the premise, and the story line! I look forward to future chapters, and I am rather hoping that this fic isn't dead, even though it's been over 6 years since it was last updated...If it happens to be dead then I hope it's actually on life support, and once your muse returns from vacation then you will be able to finish it! Hopefully your bad 2013 has been over shadowed unfortunately by a horrid 2020, but hopefully your still healthy, and well, and your family as well! I again enjoyed reading this fic, and have nothing but good things to say, I again look forward to more chapters in the future, and I sincerely hope this review finds you well and still able to write!

Hoo. You haven't spent time with people with severe disabilities.
They don't speak "Tarzan-speak".

That's okay. Sadly, for the most part, people aren't willing to give these people the time of day...and it IS sad. They're people, they have feelings, and they CAN do things that are within their skill-set. Here, Konta is USEFUL. But, even if he wasn't, people would still give a damn, unlike his family. (Sadly, there's reality in that too.)

I like this fic, to a great extent, because Konta lives among us, and no one wants to see him. I will teach and guide him as I am able, but the hardest part, if you're a teacher in the special-ed community, is that when they reach adulthood, they no longer have school to give structure to their days, friend - a peer group, and a place where they feel acceptance and belonging.

I love this fic just because Konta, who will always struggle, has people who have his back. Lord, I wish it was like that in RL.

Piece not fucking peace. There is a clear difference in these words.

Just have one question. What happened to Jiraiya? Wasn't he saved and came out of his unconscious when pain was attacking konoha?

amazing story but was cut off in its final arc. even though its incomplete it is definitely worth reading.

Is this discontinued it was JUSS getting good

good story to bad was gave up on

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This was the WAY to go m GORRILA

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Can't wait for the next one

I have enjoyed reading Son of Whirlpool and I would like to read more. Please update soon or let me know if someone else has taken over the reigns. Thank you.

Interesting story but I must say I do not like Kyosh...plus he seems very unrealistically powerful.

Liking most of the story so far. This chapter was bad though. I've never seen someone go to such lengths to remain as close to cannon as possible. Every other paragraph was another explanation for why they just had to go to suna and wait for the konoha team. If you need to explain why they're doing something multiple times than clearly you're just piling more BS onto the pile.
Sometimes it's important to let the story have a flow of its own instead of fixating on certain circumstances and events.

Ahhhh I miss you! I’ve read this story soo many times! Regardless I hope you are in a joyous state wherever you are! 3

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.