Wow. I am speechless once again. This was very good. I enjoyed it. Something to think about.

Wow. That was one of the hardest things I have ever read. That was dark, but it was really well written. Definitely something that makes you think. Thank you.

I really love how, throughout these two chapters, Danny is talking directly with the reader. That's not something that I see very often, and sometimes it doesn't come off right, but I think you made it work really well here. Good job!

I also really felt Danny's pain and frustration with his circumstances, and the inner fear he always carries around about himself. I thought his sense of reawakening in purpose was complemented with the lyrics from "Radioactive," which is such an amazing song.

I think you've still got room to expand this story with more chapters that gear specifically on one of the problems that Danny is facing. I hope you continue to update this! :) Keep up the phantastic work!

Love it this is so brilliant love the hint of DxS

So many feels great fic I love it

Wow.

That was really powerful.

A really good take on Danny's powers, responsibilities, and immortality. Really different and really good.

The poor, poor guy!

I normally don't like song fics, but I actually think that this one worked out really nicely.

Nice,

Sapphireswimming

-whistles-

deep...

i like it!

faving it now!

this could be something that goes on.

like i said-like it a lot!.

bye~spiritmind

Fantastic Angsty piece of work you did here... inmortality it's not as one think it will be.

... If you are inmortal alone that is.

Poor probably insane Danny.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Excellent!

So much raw emotion, I was tearing up while reading this.

Well done, Fantastic!