Adorable!

i love it

It's too short. Really, what you have here is fine. Gwen's been on bitchy moods that went beyond this in the show. And Kevin's not too OOC for people to slaughter you(at least in comparison to some stories out there). You did great; this was a great story.

I really liked it. it wasn't dirty but more romantic and cute. Which is a hard thing to do if it's Kevin haha I understand your pain. Love your stories

Dont worry bout it... Kevin didnt sound lame and gwen IS bitchy lol

aw, how sweet!

Hun, that you? It's me, KehXKeova from Deviantart! I didn't realize you were here too!

Now I finally have a friend!

I think Kev sounds SWEET talking to Ben like that! ...but yes, he IS hard to write!

All I'VE been writing is smut for these two DX

...but I recently did a sweet story about Kev and Ben when they were kids! Maybe I'll post it here...It's called "RAIN".

HOPE YA LIKE, BECAUSE I LOVE YOUR STORIES!

Nicely done, though it was never explained why Gwen is in a bad mood.

a pretty good story-don't think there were many mistakes: little to none.

Oh,you can get better with Kevin, but I was hoping for wet pants and more laughing matters ; Kevin usually pisses of "Benji" in a friendly yet competitive way, somewhat typical to male bonding,I suppose. But it was a good story,however... Gwen isn't the most loveable person in the universe,however..she's a little bit more tender and caring,even if I have to admit imagining a bitch! Gwen is so not that hard. : ) Nice to read,go ahead. ~

Yep, still love it

THAT WAS AWESOME!

I thought Kevin returning Ben's hug was a very touching moment and I liked Ben's efforts to get him into a leather jacket were nice too. Who wouldn't want to see that? :) And even if you weren't quite as sure, I thought Gwen was fine here. She's more mature in the new series, but when she goes off, she goes off. The only criticism I might suggest is that the episode with his mother seems a bit out of place and the 'not telling about aliens' part doesn't contribute much to where the story headed. But that's a minor quibble; and it was an excuse to use ruffian so it's all good.

I thought it was really cute :3. Not all fics need kissing (or more) in them :3.

As for Gwen being too bitchy: impossible. She's bitchy in the show anyway. And think about Kevin, everything he says in Alien Force is lame. It's just how Kevin is XD. It's impossible to avoid.

I'm not sure about constructive critism, but for advice I'd say just have a starting point and ending point in mind when writing something. That way you know where you're headed :D. But, I mean you said you weren't planning on going anywhere and that's fine X3. You still got an adorable fic here :3.