Great story! I especially liked the last part, LOL!

"It puked on me!" ROFL

Cute short story! I liked their interactions with each other. This was good.

That was pretty funny. Especially when Mizuki first use his ability.

unohana is ooc. but it was a nice change. good story. ]

I found this one-shot adorable! It's nice being able to read a story on the old days, expecially about the captains. It made readers realise that they were young once too! And I thought it was very logical to have Minazuki start out small.

This fic was very enjoyable.

Nice!

haha I love it tom!

Aww that was really nice and unique ] I'm glad someone finally wrote a fic with Unohana (one of my fave characters btw) and Juushiro and Shunshui as young peeps ]

great job dude! *thumbs up*

peace-

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:D:D Awnsome :D:D

"The next thing he knew, his head was again shoved down Minazuki’s throat." That made my day. Very nice and cute story. :D:D

Hahaha!

That was great. Little to no grammer errors, good characterization, an original plot, and very funny. Great job!

Wow. That was great. I'd never imagine Unohana going crazy like that. It's just hilarious. Nice job!

lmao. the ending was hilarious! poor shunsui.