| Reviews for His Mistake |
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   queenofspades19 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011 I wish there were more to this, it seems like an interesting spin on the beginnings of daine's story. |
| math music reading chapter 1 . 5/10/2009 I really want to know what happens next, please write the part two! |
| Brennap94 chapter 1 . 5/4/2009 write a part two, it was amazing. is she going to end up pregnant, that is kinda what it seemed like |
| cpmwjune chapter 1 . 4/14/2009 I love this story! you have to write another one! |
| Cygnet Shearwater chapter 1 . 1/9/2009 very cool, I really like it, the only thing is there's a couple of repeat lines in nearish to the end, but a very nice start, I'd love to see more! |
| Beka Copper chapter 1 . 1/6/2009 You did a really good job. i like it. you should totaly write a part two. keep up the good work. |
| Aniloverl chapter 1 . 1/5/2009 I would totally like a part two this could get interesting. |
| southernbelle61 chapter 1 . 12/23/2008 wow! youve just GOT to write a part two! this was incredible! |
| no one special chapter 1 . 12/23/2008 nice :) |
