Another pathetic loser of a writer. Can’t finish what they start. You are nothing but a big disappointment. Shame too because I was enjoying the story and thought I had found a good author. Good authors are by my definition those that finish and have something worth reading. You have good stuff, but because you didn’t finish, it’s trash. And all trash should be thrown away. I wish this site would delete any story that is incomplete and abandoned for 2 or more years.

Type your review a useless fic if a god help him meaning everytime his in trouble there always a GOD TO HELP NARUTO ÀAAAAAAAA USELESS FIC

“and most of all I hate ... turtles” That made me laugh so hard

okay I cant breath... laughing too hard. Naruto hating turtles of all things... too funny.

Great story too bad you quit it!

pity this is abandoned

good story, I hope you continue, death to the uchiha and to orochi-teme ... see you, bye!

I love the story please continue writing this fabulous story

Good story just did not like the Kushina bashing however

Love the story so far. Quick question, why is Naruto suddenly the leader at the end when there are three ofhers who outrank him. One of which has no real relation with him.

...sorry, but naming a kid kami or yami just sounds weird.

Six is too few

in my opinion if u are writing a harem fic u most likely should a at least a lemon because most people who looks thought up are probity looking for lemons

Plz update. This is really good. Ty. Sincerely, taka

i hope you update this story sometime its a great one and i love it so far