Reviews for Arrested Ancestry
cessia chapter 1 . 5/14/2017
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cessia chapter 5 . 5/13/2017
This is the best story on all of , I'd honestly pay for you to finish it, it's so good, even though it is long forgotten it seems, but Im not joking I'd pay for its completion. Its such a wonderful story and follows through the characters alarmingly so, its magical and its been years since the last chapter but thought you should know me and a few others find this to be the best fanfiction of all the DMC stories found on here, if you should continue one day it would make my day. hell, I'll even leave my tumblr on here if you ever want to contact me.
Weewee chapter 5 . 3/25/2014
Well... shit. I just found one of the - if not, the best - Devil May Cry fanfics out here. Only to find that the last update had been who knows how long ago.

Dammit, but this story was good. Frickin A.
Rather Not chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
I really hope you update this sometime. I've resigned myself to reading the same 5 chapters over and over again. I honestly think this is my favorite story on this website, of any genre/fandom, as strange as that is. But you capture their personalities so well and even add a new depth to them. The premise of the story is very interesting and I can't wait to read where it heads. The dialogue is witty and the character interactions so lovely to experience. But really, the dialogue. It's perfect.
DripToYourDrop chapter 5 . 6/6/2013
This is so awesome! I am so ready for a twin team up! Can't wait! :D
Catsareevil chapter 5 . 12/30/2012
Why u no update? Your plot has to be THE best I have ever read in a DMC FF story so please continue, I must know how it ends!
Guest chapter 5 . 11/10/2012
Man love the plot can't wait for the next update
DuskyRowan chapter 5 . 11/7/2012
Hey. Just finished reading this, I really, really enjoyed it. I know it's been a very long time, but I must ask, do you plan to continue this? It's very well written, and I think it would be a shame to just leave it here. If you've lost interest, then I understand, but please, if you have any interest left, continue this? Please?

Aside from that, I found this very funny at times, and you've really drawn me into the plot. Definitely adding to my list of great fanfics.

Anyway, if you can, please let me know if you plan to continue this at all. A response would be hugely appreciated.

Self-proclaimed fanfic critic,
TangoOrangeQueen
Diclonious57 chapter 2 . 7/28/2012
personally i want Nero all to myself but Kyrie and Nero's relationship is really sweet
HighxOnxCrack chapter 5 . 7/21/2012
Hoooly MAMA. I've been reading alot of DMC stories lately. But I honestly think this is one of the best ones. The plot is very well thought out and intriguing. Definitely the closest thing to probable Canon I've read.

Initially I was worried about the characterizations of Vergil and Dante. Vergil seemed to lean more on the overtly-craazy give-me-more-power side. And Dante rather too angry and serious. But then in chapter 5 you managed to capture them (as portrayed in the games) perfectly. Vergil slightly mad but cold, logical and scheming. Dante as...Dante. And those sparse moments of brotherhood still there.. deep inside. Great job.

My ONLY other point of interest worth mentioning is Lady Leinth and how are you going to bring her about as a character and antagonist who does not fight head on, contrary to about EVERY villian in DMC (games and fics alike). Very interesting. And I believe you have what it takes to pull it off.

This fic was last updated ...3 years ago. :( You have probably lost the muse. However, this is SUCH A GOOD STORY I must appeal. Try playing the games again. It does wonders for reigniting interests. Take your time. Update in weeks, months, or years. But I beg, do not DISCONTINUE this wonderful story.

Will wait for update.

Till then, write on.
Mr. Red Hex chapter 5 . 7/12/2012
Hello,

Now when I normally review I like to touch on aspects of a story I particularly liked, offer a bit of constructive criticism if I can, and rave a bit to spur on a faster update. However I can honestly say none of that is called for since is probably one of the most well written fanfics I've ever laid eyes on. It's like you've taken all the undertones conveyed from each of the DMC games (excluding the newest prequel) and crafted them into a story that I can honestly see as canon! So please if you're reading this get Dante, Nero, and Vergil to hell (that sounded weirder now then it did in my head), so we can find out more about this Leinth character - which by the way is perfect mythological figure to expand upon for this series - and more importantly what happened on that freezing December night! Thank again for listening and I eagerly await the next and future installments.

Sincerely,
Mr. Red Hex
Salaura chapter 5 . 4/22/2012
More, please! Your writing style is fabulous and it makes me depressed that this fic is incomplete!
theguywhoreads chapter 5 . 4/18/2012
are you gonna revive this story anytime soon or are you going to wait for the new dmc game to come out for new ideas
Reddiamond29 chapter 5 . 2/24/2012
Duude... Please update! I love this story! It has so much thought through background AND an awesome plot...

Just don't abandon something as awesome as this...
HoldenCaulfied chapter 5 . 1/29/2012
Its pretty great and I hope it can be part of the canon.

Quick Question- is he or is he not vergil's kid?
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