| Reviews for Leafpool's Forbidden Love |
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  BOIIIIII chapter 1 . 5/12/2017 NOT A FAN |
| Gracie chapter 3 . 11/21/2016 Its good |
 Kitkatluv22 chapter 1 . 7/24/2016 ash x leaf |
| makiyah lawrence chapter 2 . 11/25/2015 i 3 this its so funny XD |
| Mavis chapter 3 . 7/1/2013 Humph...I guess it's really good. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/19/2013 I think it's awsome keep writing I got stuck in the story!btw is it true? I'm only on the new propercy pt4 hahah! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2012 Ashfur rules |
| goldenleaf 435 chapter 3 . 11/25/2012 wha happened...what 'bout ashfur and leafpool |
| vindictiveme chapter 3 . 7/3/2012 You go Ashfur! :3 I'm really starting to hate Birchfall and Whitewing though... keep writing! I like this story :D |
| JustCallMeMaryLynette chapter 3 . 8/3/2009 no,you should continue this! its very good. |
| ShadX - Shadow Elf chapter 3 . 7/8/2009 UPDATE! |
| FantasyWriter chapter 3 . 4/14/2009 Pretty good! Although I think it would be interesting if you did an alternate ending type thing where Ashfur wasn't the traitor and he and Leafpool ended up together. It would be interesting if Leafpool had his kits. But the story that you wrote was good! |
| Camryn chapter 2 . 4/2/2009 /Cinderheart /Berrynose /Ashfur |
| CaptainKrueger chapter 1 . 3/20/2009 Cool. I like the story so far. I like Ashfur and I found about this pairing through a video and now I like it. |
| World of Make Believe chapter 3 . 3/18/2009 Wow, this was really good. But...there were quite a few spelling errors. You might want to look it over. P.S. I love that you wrote it in Whitewing's point of view, no one ever does... |
