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Death by utter fluffy, steamy, adorable cuteness. This was amazing. Totally awe-inspiring. Just perfect.

omg to sweet I lost all of my teethe

ugggghhhhhh! I was confused, then sad and couldn’t help the tears and then smiling like an idiot again. you! how could you ... how did you?! this is freaking amazing, I can’t breathe properly right now. THANK YOU! for writing this, this is a God-sent. uggghhh!

This was such a lovely story. I was confused at first since I didn’t really understand what was going on. I thought Naruto was dreaming and then I thought maybe this is the gate to Heaven because of Naruto’s description of the courthouse. And aye! It was close enough! I also loved Naruto and Sasuke’s talk about soulmates on the steps. And when they touched and the memories from their lives emerged! Argh! I loved it. And when they both died in the hospital I don’t even know why but I cried. Even though I knew this wasn’t the end for them. I just couldn’t hold my tears back. They really love each other. And the ending scene with them as toddlers in the future was the cutest thing ever. God, I love this story and it’s ship so much. Thanks for sharing this with us!

THIS WAS SO FRICKIN SAD AND THEN A SUPER CUTE ENDING. I cried a bit...I love naruto & sasuke soulmate stories. They always tug at my heart. Thanks for the beautiful short story

last part was soooooo cute.

I'm not crying, garaa was playing with his stupid sand again and it got into my eyes.

This is f...ing heartbreaking! With some release at the end of the story but still... The thought of soulemates never meeting till they're in The Inbetween. I don't believe in soulmates but reading something like this right here breaks something inside me because of the knowledge never having something like that in my life.
But that is the reason why I read storys like this one just to feel something... Anyway just my poetic self writing here :)

I am of no words. What just happened? And why did I get goosebumps all over? This is a legendary fanfic, beautifully written beyond my imagination! This fanfic is a miracle!

This made me giddy with glee. It was so amazingly written. I loove it! Thank you so much for writting it! I feel like some dark parts of my heart healed heheh

This story was really good. I personally think having a sequel would end up making this story, lose its charm

I always love the way you write stories..so WoW,always make my heart go Gwaaauuh! ,hnnnghand oooww~..love it do much

(I sincerely apologize for write the entire Review in Spanish, but my knowledge in english language don't provide me with the amount of words that I need to express my emotions about this masterpiece) Dios mío esta historia me encanta. Llevo en Fanfiction toda una década y me duele la ausencia de historias como éstas, gracias al cielo que me encontré con ésta obra de arte. Es absolutamente increíble la cantidad de emociones que se pueden sentir en cada mínimo pedacito de relato, desde la confusión profunda entre Naruto y Sasuke, pasando por sus personalidades siempre compatibles, y recorriendo su maravillosa historia juntos, con un final agridulce que nos deja el corazón empapado en sensaciones, no puedo decir una parte que me gustara exactamente porque toda la historia posee una solidez y dualidad digna de un Universo Alterno en toda su gloria, pero si es de escoger, me quedo con el final porque me llenó de felicidad, viendo cómo han terminado las cosas en la historia de Naruto, pienso que tú final se aproxima a lo que realmente merecía esa tremenda leyenda, y qué excelente que lo has publicado aquí, este relato tiene un alma única y lo amo muchísimo, millones de gracias por compartir un poco de tu talento con nosotros, desde el sur del mundo te lo agradezco de corazón, me has alegrado la noche, y ten por seguro que voy a leerlo mucho más seguido ahora que lo descubrí, te deseo lo mejor y gracias de nuevo por darle a estos personajes un final digno de ellos dos: Haciéndolos eternos. Eres genial, ¡A mis favoritos pero ya!

Con el alma saciada y una sonrisa en la cara, me despido.

Zamy.

PD: "Mine" debería ser el nombre oficial de casado de Naruto después de casarse con Sasuke, fin XDDDDDDD

The last part with them as toddlers were too cute .