Hi You and your story is AMAZING! I have no words! Even if I read the whole story in one go your mean (I mean incredibly creative) author's notes gave me more anxiety than anything! THANK YOU SOO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS FIC! And thank you for making my first ever Jacob/Edward read so magical! (I'm more of a harry potter fan than a twilight one.. but I'm soo glad that I ended up on your story!)

I got an account just so I can say how much I hate this fic. I don’t care that it was made in 2011 or whatever but I just hated this. The whole time Edward would never give up Bella and he’d be sad he couldn’t be with Jacob but it was his own idiotic fault they were never together. Near the ending when Edward won’t go after Bella because he could never hurt her was just truly f-ing garbage. Props to Rosalie for slamming her into a wall because it was well deserved. Honestly even near the beginning I thought that Jacob should just leave him and be happy for real. I was starting to root for Jasper honestly cause that was a way better pairing. And what pissed me off a lot was that Edward would constantly want Jacob to come to him and then would push him away. A way better ending was for Bella and Edward to stay together miserably and Jacob could have his pack and stay with the Cullens because he deserved it for putting up with the crap that was dished to him.

Hi, I'm from Brazil and I read your fic and its AMAZING! I wanted to ask you if I could translate it to Portuguese and post it on another website. I think your story is incredible and extremely well-written.
Thank you.

bruhhhh

Wow! That was truly amazing! You're a real talent.
I had to read the whole story in one go. So, if I fail in my exams next week, I will blame Jacob ;-)

Heeeeeeiiiiiiinn!? Wh...Wh...Wha...What's happening?

Edward : No Jacob, you can't die or .. or ... I'll kill you *sob*

*Jacob dies*

NOOOOOOOOO! *Howl of despair*

Then, Jacob comes back to life...

Edward: I said I'll kill you

Bella also deserves to die

Connasse de merde d'idiote à la con! I knew it was her! She can't leave without telling them!

I'm sure it's not love: she just loves to be loved by a vampire, to have a place in a vampire family. She's not really in love.

First of all ... I HATE THIS CHAPTER! It made me cry almost all through my reading
Also, why is Edward like that toward Bella? It's not like the baby is his. He does not have to accompany Bella to each of his appointments. Other members of the family can do it.
Plus, he does not have to have the same room as Bella : He wanted to marry her because of her pregnancy, but at home, he could just share Jacob's room. Ah! It annoys me so much!
Also, me at the end

Bella ... the whole situation ... pisses me off!
Let them be together. Edward should never have married her. He is too kind and Bella is so selfish.

Thanks my God! It's not Edward's child *reassured sigh* I hope they will quickly get divorced so that Jacob will have a great love affair with Edward

Honestly, I wish Bella and Edward did not get married (I have always hated this couple.)

I remember, in the movie, they tried to make Bella/Edward story like Romeo and Juliette; which completely wrong. I never saw them like that. However, Jacob/Edward's love story is more like that of this cursed couple.

You said it that was a truly bizzare trip. Like I'm still shaking my head and wondering what just happened. You have a gift for setting a scene (I had palpitations running with Jacob while he tried to reach Edward in time the previous chapter) and my god you gave me heart attack with the way you introduced CJI actually had to re-read the whole scene again because a I also concluded the same as Edward). And really Edward didn't guess IT after he couldn't hear CJ. Yay for you again. Please do continue writing in any form whatsoever you have a talent for it.