Sweet, sweet justice.

this story is based on the va tech massacre, the south Korean student killed 33 people and committed suicide

Heartbreakingly well written

Oh God...
It was very well written and creative, and you make some good points. Well done.
Literally on the verge of tears...

Dude, you should it so emotional. So, awesome. I cried like crazy.

My, that was deep. I understand and agree with your beliefs for I have experienced and seen a lot in my school life. I'm only 14, but how we talk to each other today is awful. I have a really good friend in a very bad position and whenever I try to consult her, she pushes me away. Also, I regrefully admit, it takes a lot to keep MYSELF away from the razor. This does show how us humans how cruel we've become. And the true darkness of the show. You may have unknowingly showed people what the world was really like. Thank you for writing this.

It's pretty obvious that if you see a pair of pale skinny twins on the corner of your town, you should help them, shelter them, and embrace them, not freaking scream and discard them. People in Nod's Limbs really make me sick (and so are people in the world).

Edgar and Ellen are true geniuses. Salute for the story.

i understand what you are saying is sad but true what you are asking is way too easy so easy that we kill people instead sometimes i hate the fact that i'm humman to the point where i feel sick.

This actually made me cry. I can't imagine this happening in "Edgar and Ellen". You did a really great job, keep up the good work. :'( :'(

I've never thought of it that way. It makes sense though. I like your thinking. Good story too.

really? 85%? I would thought it would be 90% or something higher.

that is soo sad (

Oh wow, it is so amazing, incredible, demented and sad all at the same time. I know it sounds sick, but when Edgar killed Stephanie and went all loopy hyteria, I didn't know whether to burst out laughing, or crying. Wow.

It was so dark but I loved it! Just please never make something like this again for Edgar and Ellen. I didn't think the story sucked, it was fantastic, and I loved the song lyrics in it. And your rant is so true! I feel the same way. Awesome story :)

Truth

I understand you point & I agree with you. I loved the story , it was so dramatic and also interesting. THis story made me want to slit my own troat for Ellen.I'll agree it was poorly written, but one of the best stories I've eveer read. I'm impressed that you see and understand such deep, but entiely true, facts about school and life. I like how youe ranted from your heart, it was brave. Lastly, I loved the story, the facts, & the authors talent in order to write this fanfic.