Reviews for Naruto: Hitoshirezu Years
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
One of the most underrated fics of all time...
ABigAssMoose chapter 18 . 6/15/2012
Wow. Simlpy wow. Ive read alot of fics and yours is up there with the absolute best of them. Seriously i love the plot i love the OCs i love hanabi (and i DO give you alot of credit for hanabi(; ) and i love how well this story is written. I would have to look pretty hard and be pretty picky to find something that could use improvement.

The ONLY major problem is...

You need to update more often! (:

Seriously. Keep up the fabulous work and il keep reading until you stop writing!
dzk87 chapter 3 . 3/3/2012
Feels slightly bland... Would be cool if you had the situations be more... exciting?
dzk87 chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Obvious focus on the people that will be her team, some effort to describe the others would be nice... More description in general could also help, but this is an always...
Master Solo chapter 18 . 2/28/2012
one of the best OC/hanabi centric fics that I've read so far. You've obviously done your research and laid things out in perfect detail, from the design of the exam to the fight sequences in the first mission. Guess failing their missions will be a running gag for the blind sensei. Can't wait for the next part.
top chapter 18 . 12/24/2011
You know that was a quite interesting and original fight scene. I don't think most people appreciate how difficult that is to do. Sorry to hear about your loss of computer. I've had some of the weirdest stuff happen to me and lost some data. Always keep a backup device or at least e-mail the story to yourself. I've learned that the hard way.
top chapter 17 . 8/23/2011
An enjoyable chapter. I half expected for water to start filling the one chamber as soon as Kaji reference it. I think you cut the right rooms by the way.
hlm9803 chapter 17 . 8/18/2011
Yay! Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 17 . 8/17/2011
cool
top chapter 16 . 5/30/2011
I feel so lame saying nice chapter or enjoyable chapter, but that is just because you don't know how high my standards are. All joking aside Hanabi facing her shortcomings is a nice thing to see. I think even if she didn't pass at this point she would be a different person. That being character development I would say this arc is already a big success.
hlm9803 chapter 16 . 5/28/2011
Awesome!
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 16 . 5/28/2011
cool
hlm9803 chapter 15 . 4/28/2011
Awesome!
top chapter 15 . 4/28/2011
A nice chapter overall. It's nice to see will finally get to see some of a certain character's past.
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 15 . 4/27/2011
sweet!
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