Reviews for A Town in Twilight
Twinightprawn chapter 17 . 2/24
It's a shame this story has not been updated in 5 years its really good
Guest chapter 16 . 11/23/2016
Thank you so much for posting TT A TT
You're such a good writer
shadowwolf547 chapter 16 . 6/9/2015
Cracked up laughing mate, good job. Loved Roxas reaction
DragonSilhouette chapter 17 . 5/11/2015
These are all so sweet... and hilarious... and other complimentary adjectives... :)
PepsiColaa chapter 17 . 1/9/2015
i've been a fan of this story ever since it was just a one shot (yes this is a new acc) i gotta say this is my fav fic, the romance is subtle but nice, the oneshots have nice cute plots, my favorite though is the one where hayner is a model and a pro at it lmao, i wonder if it's going to make a comeback? anyway, this chap was nice too, especially hayner and namine shouting at each other for no reason lol.. keep it up!
Ignis76 chapter 17 . 1/8/2015
So cute! XD
Harumaki chapter 16 . 12/31/2014
I love this so much - was happy enough just to see an update. Have a happy new year!
Ignis76 chapter 16 . 12/10/2014
Oh god this was fantastic! I had to wait full ten minutes before posting this review because I couldn't stop laughing :D

I really loved this chapter and I'm looking forward to more :)
Guest chapter 16 . 12/3/2014
Last time I checked you only had fourteen chapters, now sixteen. Thank-you. I agree with the end I thought the chapter was amazing and had its usual humor but did not have that touch of character the beginning chapters had. But two questions: one, how did the bench fit inside the train? And two, how heavy is a bench to carry around? And now to go to the previous chapter, I was excited to see you wrote Layle in as he is a great character that usually has no mention exec wot for his original plot. And the relationship between Lightning, Serah, and Snow seemed spot on. My favorite part would have to be the call and text between Snow, Cloud, and Roxas. The chapters transition glowingly and smoothly reference previous chapters and events, which is hard for me to do so yours really seems excellant in my mind. Thanks again for writing and hope for another chapter to read.
94yonders chapter 16 . 11/30/2014
ADORBS! hahaha from the first paragraph i didn't think this was about roxas's liking her thing, and i like the surprise of that hahahaa, as always it is written well and quite light hearted. and gosh i wonder what really happened about those handcuffs :))) can't wait to read the references on that on the next chapters:)
Kudos to you! :D
MusicInfiresMe chapter 15 . 7/22/2014
I was curious about something (no its not a suggestion but it can be if you want I'm honestly just curious) have you ever thought of using the whole "Roxas is voiced by Jesse McCartney so he can sing hahaha!" idea?It sounds like something Hayner would have a field day with. I can imagine Hayner teasing Roxas about how he should sing to Naminé.
Blackoutdancer chapter 15 . 7/10/2014
This is AMAZING! :D Plz update!
chrome scale chapter 14 . 6/6/2014
HOLY CRAP, you updated. Thank you for doing so! I just your story so much!
Guest chapter 14 . 4/1/2014
Is the Layle you mentioned from the Crystal Bearers or is he from a series I do not know about? I like how this chapter had a darker undertone; it was very well done and descriptive. I loved how Roxas was tied to a chair as he was the biggest 'threat' with the three. Who knocked him out anyway? I like how you characterize him with references feom the actual KH series. Sorry if I am rambling. I wish to read your next chapter soon and hope you will not slumber for a few years before posting it.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/1/2014
How high is the clocktower? I like these oneshots, they are funny and realistic. I think it would be nice to read a Axel-Xion-Roxas one but it is interesting with the other four with all point of views. I especially liked the one in which Roxas could cook. Will that be used in any future stories? Thanks for writing this collection and I hope it will be continued.
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