Reviews for Elevator Music
thewaterymellen chapter 4 . 6/24
I dunno if you're seeing this since it's been over a decade (2008... wow... I was 2 years old), but I really love the second person. Not many people even attempt it, and from personal experience, it's quite hard to write... I applaud you for pulling it off perfectly :)

I never grew up on Nickelodeon (I wasn't old enough when iCarly aired anyway, and I grew up watching Mickey Mouse Club House on Disney Channel and nothing else... then by the time I was 6, we had no cable...) with any of the insanely amazing shows, and all I can do now is watch Victorious on Netflix and watch iCarly on illegally uploaded Dailymotion videos... so I envy you :))
Cain chapter 4 . 12/12/2011
Lovely, lovely, lovely!
Infinii chapter 4 . 11/9/2011
It never ended! -gasps-
Mileycfan4eva chapter 4 . 4/21/2011
awesome story aw an i wish u had wrtiten more!
weirdprince chapter 4 . 9/23/2010
I loved this, very much. You're excellent at writing second-person point of view, I was really impressed. Great job.
Inscribed-on-my-heart chapter 4 . 1/5/2010
please update! tis' real good!
pleading chapter 4 . 12/23/2009
I really enjoyed this, truly. It had amazing plot -as always and you really brought out the best in all the character -it was as if you hit them with a personality gun and nailed it. Honestly, amazing shit.

Up-date soon?

Or at least don't let this one die just yet, please.
Lee Lamprush chapter 4 . 12/4/2009
this story rocks so far is there another chapter or two or are you planing to leave it here i hope to see more and i have been reading a lot of your work and you are a very steller writer and i was hoping you would give my iCarly story a once over and tell me what you think because at the rate i am going i may need to start bouncing ideas off someone else to make the story great but truth be told i think your good and your opinion would mean a lot to me
me chapter 4 . 11/24/2009
you have to finsh this story or i'll cry
GrlCalledLauren chapter 4 . 11/15/2009
I like this story.

The writing perspective is different, it's second person and because I am more of a third person to third person limited; i respect anyone who has the ability to produce a decent second person story. It's also beautiful (cheesy word I know) but it's very harmonious, in the subtle angst and light humor. It's depressing and sweet without being fluff or melodramatic. I hope you write more :)

~Playmaker
Lostmemories203 chapter 4 . 9/30/2009
i relle like this story! Itz very interestin. I waz skeptical about Chris but he doesnt seem like a bad guy. Luvin it! Plz update soon!
Ookami Z chapter 4 . 9/26/2009
Wow this is really amazing. I look forward for the update :D
lita rocks LbC chapter 4 . 9/25/2009
ooh, okay. now his actions seem more understandable! haha. i really thought he was gonna do something stupid to the kids. freddie seriously cracked me up in this chapter. he's hilarious ) i'm glad sam and her father finally talked. great chapter. update soon )
kiyo028 chapter 4 . 9/25/2009
*satisfied*

i loved the cute little moments, you wrote them so well.

awesome story!

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