This was freaking sweet and adorable and lovely all rolled up into awesome!

A perfect little one-shot to scratch that comedic-romantic itch. A quirky story with cute, flustered fluff. The running theme of scents made for a solid one, and the characters monologue gave a clear window into the thoughts of the characters. Excellent work!

que lindos que son Ami y Zoi, este ultimo es encantador ... me habia faltado leer esta primera parte, y me gusta tanto como las dos siguientes... y que buena amiga Mina, aunque su sonrisa en algun punto debe haber dado miedo jajaja... brillante y deliciosa historia

That cute that are Ami and Zoi, the latter is charming ... I had missed reading this first part, and I like it as much as the next two ... and that good friend Mina, although her smile at some point must have Scared lol ... brilliant and delicious story

Zoi-baby finally got over his blonde complex. Jade, Neph and Kunzite are probably relieved.

Ah yes the color unstable

So sweet

Nice alternitive situation. Made me smile.

Well done!

I loved that.

I loved the way you let the subtext do the talking.

I loved the way Ami was so very muddled-yet-in-character.

I also loved a host of other things, but those stand out.

On to the next oneshot, then!

~Mademise Morte

AHH! I totally enjoyed this story! I had to suppress my grin since I'm supposed to be working - but what a lovely break!

I wonder if Zoicite will really have a blue complex later on XD

It's an amusing most fav is Ami/Zoi too. I juz love Zach,Ami and Mina in this. Thanks for sharing.

Yay! I have decided I love your stuff. I do some Ami/Zoi too, and I have to agree that they are an adorable couple. Nice short.

Cute. I like it. :D

This was hysterical! I kept laughing. Good job. :)

I like how you characterized both Ami and Zoi/Zach (and the way you described why she had blue hair, too!), and thought you did a good job with conveying the awkwardness of a first conversation, esp. w/a shy girl like Ami. (And have you noticed that, spelling-wise, awkward itself is an awkward looking word due to the double w? I just did, haha!)

And I know what you mean about scents that no human should wear. I used to work at Walgreens and when Jessica Simpson came out with fragrances and lip balms and such, they all had strange bakery smells. I think Bath and Body Works actually had some chocolate smell at one point! (And I'm ashamed to say that, at the time, I did buy the cookie dough scent from that B&B line ;)

...Well, at least we know it will attract hot men like Z., right? _

Thank you for sharing!

This was so cute and funny! My favourite senshi is Ami, and I kinda like to see my favourite characters embarassed (I'm cruel, I know ') so I'm definetly going to read the other two stories. Keep up the good work!