damnit. the story is really good and i hoped to read more chapter.

why not put this story up for adoption?

I don’t really understand why the author made the changes that he made in chapter 1 from a narrative standpoint. The most ridiculous thing of all is the nonsense about Minato and Kushina’s lives being linked...it’s just really dumb. Also, if Kurama wasn’t sealed inside Kushina and Mito, what the fuck was Hashirama doing? Basically, the strongest tailed beast was just roaming around...destroying whatever it wanted for over 50 years and nobody did a goddamn thing until it attacked Konoha? Yeah...that makes sense. The latter half of the chapter was also completely unnecessary and redundant because that was basically canon...even though we don’t really see it happening.

Wow i didn't expect my favorite quote here, "you can forgive but never forget". Great novel but it's a pity as i expected naruto to hide his abilites and show them (not all) on chunin exam

Ugh, the please stop using the suffix san so often. San is used when the person is in a formal situation or doesn't exactly know the person he is talking to. You keep on using it in the dumbest places and it pisses me off.

did they mean pay check?

Pre-chapter banter: Alpha rubs his wrists, "Yeah well; I'm not one for 'door slamming' or 'spilling milk'. I'll let ya know if I find any overly rough diamonds; but for the most part: I'm blunt. I'm wordy. I've got the patience of a volcano and the subtlety of a battering ram. Here's hoping it's worth something to you."

CRACK

That sounds hard wish you well.

Then give it to someone who can. There are many on here who could continue it.

Well...if ever there was a reason to discontinue a fic, it's def this one. My hats off to you for your maturity and hard work. I can't even begin to imagine doing what you have done for your mother and I hope everything works out for you with the teaching. Considering this is now a new year, I for one wish you well and I pray things in your life pick up for the better. Hopefully one day you will be able to return to this wonderful hobby of writing, but till then, good luck and GREAT JOB for being a damn good son!

Noooooooo!

Still neither Sasuke or Sakura asked Naruto about his transformation and I thought that they would think it was a big deal. Now doesn't Naruto have to tell them why people from the village tried to kill him?

Sakura and Sasuke didn't ask Naruto about changing into a dragon or if they believed it was a jutsu neither asked to learn it and nobody else in the forest felt the battle happening?

At this point neither Naruto or any of the others seem to have become any stronger have they? I'm also curious about what happened to Sasuke's mom since she hasn't been mentioned at all not have any of the other living Uchiha..Is it because they may not get the sharingan so they don't bother becoming ninjas? What happened to Shisui?

I'm hoping Naruto becomes more...more powerful and more attractive. His father, Kakashi and Itachi were all more powerful than Naruto is at the same age and Naruto has some powerful genetics to go with him being 1\2 dragon and 1\2 phoenix but I'm curious why nobody is surprised by this news... Did any of them know about his parents being from these clans or being something other than human because they seem to be taking it rather well ? If Minato was a clan head of the dragons then why didn't he live with them? Why was he in konahoa as a ninja ?