Your writing is good, and you tell a story well but I was tricked into reading this thinking it would be Alec and Max togeher. Dont really wanna see Alec and anyone else especially not Sam.

Oh, I adore this. Absolutely. How lovely and meaningful.

That was hard for me to read. But in a good way. I mean that angsty I guess. Painful and aggravating, because of Max’s choice. Agonizing because the last person you would want him to move on with is the girl that has her face, but would choose to give him the chance. I loved it.

Wow! I really liked this. Everyone and everything felt real. Even though I would prefer Max/Alec, you did this so well, I really loved it!

That was friggin awesome! This so calls for afollow up. I want to know Max's reaction! Cause let's face it there's noway Logan can measure up to Alec.

That was so sad - Joshua's death was so unexpected. What happened afterwards, slow and unstoppable and equally sad. Ah. Beautifully done. The flashbacks were lovely.

Phoebe