| Reviews for Darkest Before Dawn |
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   celajwhitney chapter 18 . 10/15/2019 so the wolves broke the treaty? why am i not surprised! |
| celajwhitney chapter 17 . 10/15/2019 were the stupid mutts on the Cullen's territory, or just following them to make trouble? |
| Cavelenare chapter 4 . 5/25/2019 Ugh. It’s bad. I really tried. It’s just that the whole story basically goes: - I said this. - I did that. - He said this. - He did that. - So I did something. - Then I said something. - Then she said something too. —‘scene’ change— Rinse, repeat. There’s zero substance or effort in the writing. It’s practically an outline with no character development and the bare bones of a scene. I’m unsure why this has so many follows/reviews/faves |
| Sofia chapter 37 . 5/1/2019 Please write more... It means a lot to me... |
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/10/2019 Thank you for that! you and the author of The Day the Earth Stood Still (GREAT fic, run don't walk to read it) are the only ones I have encountered who have the decency to write it the way it should have been in canon! I always felt like it was merely a clumsy plot device to prolong the saga. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/10/2019 how much of Bella's fatigue was "real" and how much was Jasper-induced? |
| Frankie09 chapter 37 . 2/17/2019 I have to read the sequel |
| dramoinelover143 chapter 37 . 3/5/2018 i cried at the end,i cant stop crying your a good writer |
| Winter0800 chapter 1 . 1/10/2018 Interesting |
| amy.campbell.378199 chapter 2 . 12/29/2017 Thus is a sweet start to a B&J story. I am guessing Edward had to leave because Bella is still his singer in this story. I like the uncomplicated way you have decided to bring B&J together. |
| Kushka chapter 37 . 7/19/2017 Great story |
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/7/2017 i really liked this chapter bc u included a part where Jasper Alice and Edward place little flags by the veterans gravestones. it was cute to me when Jasper asked Bella if she wanted to come with them to go figure out some tbings about Alice! Bella and Jasper are adorable together and i personally like him better than Edward.. shhhhh |
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/18/2017 Nah that Part of the Story is not that good I mean Why die Jasper was't stunned by Tylers car? Why would he even come down from the tree when he could have jumped from tree to tree with Bella in his Arms? |
| Guest chapter 17 . 4/18/2017 And again! How can it be that Jasper can't breake free when he's seeing his Man Fall? PLS dude... |
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/18/2017 Dude Really?! Jasper, the probably best Fighter in the whole twilight saga can't even dispose James off his Life alone? You cruely crushed my hope about a cool duel, come on I bei You to Rendite this litten Part. Best Regards |
