Wonderfully written and very intriguing.

The conflict and desturbans in Avalanche over this whole affaire brings in a very interesting dynamic. That disk though... You really managed to communicate how terrible it was.

I love they way you portray Clouds POV. The line between dream and reality is very thing causing a bit of mindf***ery and it is totally ensnaring. It also gives a terrifying picture of the dreadful state Cloud finds himself in.

The insane Sephiroth seems close enough in character in his insanity. The part where he talks about about all the events being as a result of Sephiroth delivering Cloud's un-uttered desires reminds me of the scene in further spin offs (was it disidia?) where Sephiroth said something similar as his role being there to provide Cloud with a purpose to fight.

I like the sane Sephiroth very much as well. He is very composed, but his humanity comes also clearly through in his small gestures. His interest for the Cadet Cloud is also rather intriguing. I'd love to find out more about it. I can't help but wonder though if this is one of the stories that will never be finished. Well, I suppose I don't really care if it is finished at this point. Seeing just another chapter would be a great pleasure just in and of itself.

Anyway. I enjoyed these first 10 chapter enormously and thank you for sharing them with all of us!

Holy Jenovas Batman, this is a fantastic story! It looks like this has been on the back burner for a very long time, but I hope you'll get the inspiration to finish this. Pretty amazing idea and execution.

I hope that you finish this story. I'm dying to know what will happen next.

awn no more updates? waht a cliffhanger. i will wait then i suppose

I love Sephi, hehehe, and Tifa is a bitch Kudoos!

Since I've already reviewed chapter ten, I can't do so again. But I would like to remind you that this story is here and begging for you to write more on it. It's such a great and unique story that it just NEEDS to be completed. . So hopefully you'll do so. Waiting patiently.

CT.

Please update!

This is just a nudge in hopes that the story isn't dead. I absolutely love your writing and would love to read more. :)

this is written quiet well,I suppose Clouds fears and night mare would end a lesser man- I am looking forward to reading more-

I really, really loved this. You wrote it so well, and the emotions... I found myself holding my breath and gasping more than once... thank you for sharing!

So I just found this story and wow! I really wish you would continue it. It's beautiful.

CT.

You promised~

And you broke that promise~

IT'S JULY, YOU HAVENT UPDATED IN SEVEN MONTHS

Fuck you!

... Need I mention the hiatus?

Well, I am liken' the idea of this story. CloudXSeph is one of my fave pairings, and it's nice to see a rebirth fic of them every once in a while.

But seriously! Come back to the living! Cloud has some serious s*** to speak about with Sephiroth.

The Ninja Vendetta

GAH! Why did you stop right before Cloud's explanation? AAAHHHHHHHHHH! Too gooooooddd... ...must read moooooore... ...but cannot... ...please!

This story is fantastic- I adore your characterizations :) I eagerly await more!