Love it thus far can’t wait for more

I saw almost 200k words and think “oh yes” and then i noticed there’s only 5 chapters and thinkoh no...”
from the looks of it, i was right. Too much fcking information I’m not interested aboutboring.

That couldn’t have been a more obvious Avatar Reference if you’d tried. Loving the story so far, and I’m a little stupefied at how long each chapter is—about 40k words each?

Please continue

Stupid

This is amazing! Keep up the good work!

Bronedge tone it the fuck down I'm not training to be a ninja. I don't need to read every single step on how to be one. Chill, relax a little with it. You have an interesting concept why, God, why are you putting so much filler. You put more in here then the owner put in Naruto and everyone knows the amount of filler in there is ridiculous. No one needs this much detail.

neat story, with how much naruto is training compared to the original the chunin exams should be interesting
though I do question the fact that naruto was quoted as making thousands of clones regularly without noticing but then made 50 of each during the bandit fight and was winded

An update would be welcome ...

Are you going to come back to this story, it's too good to die at such a spot.

shit fic don't read

Great story! I really like that alternate team Naruto is on is made up of OC's. I especially like Hayato. :D Hope you continue this sometime.

Mother fing God this story is awesome

It's too bad you never updated this story.
Ruy and Kasumi are great teammates for Naruto.

Wait, what? You stopped?! Come on! This was a great story! It had amazing length in chapters, it built up great tension and scenarios, not to mention very well written with the crossover elements.