LOVE THIS CHAPETR! I especially the way you write assumes character. Hope you didn’t give up on this just yet

It should be illegal to let such a great story unfinished!
Hoooow? Whyyyy? Why would you do that? The plot is incredible! The idea... so original!

In the beginning I was confused, but after I read about "the father" and when I reread the title of the story I knew what you were doing. I also read the actual "Brave new world" and "1984". But I didn't expected such a great story!
I'm happy that at least you didn't let me completely in the dark and you wrote some answers to some of my questions...
So. I love who you choose for the father figure XD
It's a shame that you left this story like this. It was amazing! And I thank you for the chapters that you shared with us.
Maybe! Maybe you will come back and finish this little masterpiece.

OMG... you haven't any idea about how hard has been for me to understand this fic! And I'm not say it for your write style, it's 'cause my languaje is not English... but I can understand more than a 60% reading your languaje... and the summary catched me! Inmedeately I say to my self : I should have to tey it. Then, 'cause my weak english, I skipped several parts...hahaha... sorry... and I focused in the parts where Sakura flirted with Sasuke, and... wow I loved it! Sex was so hot and fantabulous, hahaha... my nose is blodding, I' m so pervert. But obviously my skips in the fic, it make me lose all the details, and more. I'm absolutely sure. However, I will continue reading the next chapters, even if I keep jumping in the fic. And I don't use de Google traductor for full paragrhaps, 'cause is a desaster! And finally, understand less. :(
Well... that' s all.
Kisses! Bye.

... and sorry for my writing errors ;)

Hmmm, I'm a bit confused. Not because of the plot or the setting of the story or even the writting style, but because the characters seem a bit weird - specifically Kakashi and Sasuke. After a couple of chapters I got on board with the fact that the characters are more grim due to this situation they're in, but why the change in Sasuke's personality from caring to abusive all in the same timeline / event? And though I appreciate the mystery you're creating with the other flashbacks and snippets, I'm not sure if they're from various lifetimes/reincarnations of SakuSasu or potentially hallucinations. Because again these flashbacks themselves aren't consistent with the characters, though I can imagine they're not always Sasuke and Sakura. Generally though I applaud your creativity and celebrate the confusion/mystery. It might also be helpful to use a beta / peer to review to ensure the mystery isn't confusing the readers in the wrong way (which it may be in my case).
Cheers

Okay honestly I didn't even know what was going on in the first couple chapters all I knew was that damn right I love how I don't know what's happening because dhaigixjsbxs it's just so gud.

Even without writing full completely shitty sentences those clues and short clips God it builds an image that keeps on morphing and changing every time a new chapter is introduced and god.

Sakura...

You are so many times fucked up. And god Sai you're just fucking up shit too.

You need to update :((( it is literally my favourite fanfic

Weird#dddddddd!

I'm rereading this story, it's so amazing and I really hope you do update soon

is good

fucking amazing but wtf Sasuke irughierghier fucking asshole jefuewhfi SAKURA HANG IN THERE

although at first i was extremely confused with the constant injection past memories and quotes... i eventually got on board with your writing style...i hope you continue this story because it atopped when things are just getting good :)

This story is killer! I mean obvs you know it but I have never read anything like it and I'm totally enraptured by the originality of the plot and the twists and yooo it's just too good! What interest does Itachi have in Sakura? What is the endgame with our villain's plans of experimentation and drugs and numbering folks? Is there an organised resistance as well? I'm almost leaning towards a narusaku ship in this fic but I love the angst of his unrequited love. Did itachi assault Sakura? I feel like there would be more repercussions.

Anyways this is amazing and I hope you find time and inspiration to update again soon.

I love this!
can't wait for the next one!

It's been almost a year since the last update but this is so amazingly written and I hope that you may decide to continue this lovely piece of work someday :)

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