Very good story.

I adore this story. I love the moments between Scott and Virgil. I love the determination and the heroics in all of them, and I love the caring moments. You’ve written this beautifully. Thanks so much for such a wonderful read.

Nutty
(Off the edge, but learning to fly)

I don't normally like OC's but Jennifer fit in perfectly. Great job! Keep it up!

Prank war

Jennifer stayed! YAY! lol Oh, Gordon, you just had to get hurt, didn't you... I had so much fun reading this, thank you for writing and posting such a great story!

I don't know, I think it would be a good idea for a doctor to join and if she's willing to practice in secrecy, why not? Yay! Virgil isn't dying anymore! It seems things are finally getting back to normal.

I knew it! I knew she couldn't be trusted! I mean, she apparently can be but I knew she knew more than she let on. Good thing she's on their side. Oh and Scott! He's such a great big brother! I love him to pieces!

Alan did the right thing by going for Virgil. I'm relieved Jeff realized that and took it easy on Alan. Great chapter once again!

How could you?! As if he wasn't hurting enough you go and practically hand him over to death! Virgil, hold on! And then poor Scott, not being able to do anything...

Even through pain, they'll do whatever they can to help. I'm proud but extremely concerned at the same time. There's only so much their bodies can take and I'm pretty sure they'll push themselves as much as they can plus a bit more. Another great chapter! To the next!

The way Scott and Virgil interact just makes me so happy! I'm glad to see they're doing a lot better and hope they don't get too bored with their door-staring. lol Also, I agree with Jeff about the doctor. Any doctor would want to know exactly what happened to their patients as to better help them but she was just like, eh. Haha Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, I don't have to wait! To the next!

Poor Virgil! I hope he doesn't suffer too much and gets better soon. The same with Scott! Although, I'd love to see them being fussed over. Great chapter now on to the next!

Oh my goodness! First chapter and I'm already hooked! I can't begin to imagine what Virgil is feeling but your description sure helps. I hate that I started reading this ten minutes before I start working because now I won't know what happens until lunch! Great job, though and I'll be back!

Hey Harmony, I have readed your fanfic 'Out of Control' for a second time and I totally Love it ! I love the closeness of Scott and Virgil, theyre my favorites ! ;) You also had the other Tracys spot on ! I just think Jeff would't be THAT paranoid for taking them to a hospital ! I also liked the doctor and how you explained her well !

I hope you write more of those !

Hugs,

Liesbeth

This is a well thought out and well written story, you certainly put Scott and Virgil through the mill.

I dont think Jeff had any choice but to take on the doctor.

Will there be a follow up?