Great, I especially like the quote “taking up his position at Megatron's side as though he belonged there.
He did.” good job.

Nice!~

Very nice

Awww i loved it so much. :3 ots a sweet story.
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Man im so cheesy

ooo I really liked it! it was most interesting to see the process that starscream went through to get the position of air commander.

i dunno what to say besides i love this!

i love arrogant starscream! XD

Oh my gosh, this was AMAZING. You should write more! -squee-

This an amazing story! I loved it! XD

I love getting glimpses of what Megs and Screamer were like before they became dark. Beautifully written.

I love me a good prequel, and this hit all the right notes: the meeting between characters, the instant chemistry, the hints and speculations on what the future would hold. I do enjoy reading about Starscream's grace and prowess and intelligence, because in spite of his many bumbles throughout G1, he must have had the Right Stuff in order to claw his way to the top somehow. I'm not sure if it's quite what you meant, but the way you described Starscream's wings constantly flicking back and forth made me think of butterfly wings, and it was a lovely image.

This is just awesome! Hotter than some all out explicit pr0n the tension between them just sizzles! I love Starscream so sublimely arrogant and ahahaha Megatron you have only yourself to blame. But can't blame him to much - Starscream on his knees is exquisite the way you descibe it.

And I love the image of Starscream perched triumphantly atop his opponent!

Well-written and really enjoyable to read. I'm glad I came across this fic :)

Wow, this is beautiful! I really love your descriptions and the chemistry between Megatron and Starscream.

Aww! That was so cute! I LOVE MegaStar so, so much! Especially when it's done properly, like right here. I'm not a huge fan of the "Starscream's-only-Megatron's-little-bitch-and-completely-incapable-of-taking-care-of-himself." I much prefer when they are happily fighting with each other, each trying to best the other, and having the times of their lives while they do it. So good job! Insta-fave!

aww, love it! xD

it's refreshing to read a megsy and screamer fic with them actually not backstabbing/beating on each other :)

anyway, you've completely captured the dynamics of the characters, i love the relationship... and the tension. corr. lots of it!

i thought screamer was going to EXPLODE when megs told him to bow.

:D

and starscream was beautifully arrogant.

"I'll be right." - oh yes. heheh :P

you have to do more of this pairing!

Damn, this is absolutely fantastic